Emily comes to the attention of Ezekial Norne.
A chronology of my attempts at creative writings, and my attempts to present those to the world at large (ie selling them)
Saturday, June 28, 2014
Thursday, June 26, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 88 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Vesuvius unleashes a powerful lightning bolt at Horus.
Row 1 Box 2 Horus cringes but does not stop even as his flesh is
burning. In the background, the three lynchpin's have small but
subtle features making them look a bit more like Horus.
Horus: Avinal Avinal Avinale
Row 2 Box 1 Nungo points his fingers into the air and assumes an
almost martial arts like stance. A battle is raging all around him
between the fae forces and Horus's.
Row 2 Box 2 A vortex of intermixing fire and ice join Vesuvius's
lightning striking Horus.
Row 2 Box 3 Horus whirls around to face Vesuvius and Nungo.
Row 3 Box 1 Horus slams his hands together and is surrounded by a
nimbus of power. Very subtly in the background the lynchpins can be
seen reverting back to normal.
Row 3 Box 2 Fire, Ice and Lightning slam into Vesuvius and Nungo,
slamming them both backward.
Tuesday, June 24, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 87 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Nungo steps out of the portal. Behind him is a whole line of
'good' trolls, imps and other fae creatures from the other side of
the veil. Nungo looks annoyed but determined.
Row 2 Box 1 Close up of Nungo's fingers snapping.
SNAP!
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius's bubble pops and suddenly he can breath. Jesra
looks very happy.
Row 2 Box 3 Sluice is surrounded by a glow.
Row 2 Box 4 Sluice is now entirely whole.
Row 3 Box 1 Horus looks down from the corner of his eye and looks
concerned but does not stop his ritual.
Horus: Atila Zedemra Fortilana
Row 3 Box 2 The trolls working for Horus immediately turn around and
begin battling the forces that Nungo has brought with him.
Row 3 Box 3 Jesra reaches down and picks up the wand.
Row 3 Box 4 Jesra points the wand at Horus and a stream of boxing
gloves come out.
Row 4 Box 1 Horus looks annoyed at their impact but doesn't stop.
Horus: Atinea Forical Tortuga
Row 4 Box 2 Vesuvius smiles on Jesra's shoulder and opens his hand.
Vesuvius: You're a natural but would you mind?
Row 4 Box 3 Jesra looks mildly chagrined, smiles and hands him the
wand.
Row 4 Box 4 Vesuvius takes it and smiles wickedly.
Vesuvius: Thanks!
Saturday, June 21, 2014
Thursday, June 19, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 86 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 The box around Vesuvius is getting smaller and smaller.
Vesuvius does not look good.
Row 1 Box 2 Sluice is almost all dust now, only his face and a bit of
an arm remain.
Row 1 Box 3 Jesra lies on the ground surrounded by trolls who are
pointing halberds at her.
Row 1 Box 4 Jesra looks down and drops the wand.
Jesra: Fine.
Row 2 Box 1 Horus turns and begins casting a spell.
Horus: And now we fix the damage that has been done.
Row 2 Box 2 A mystic link is established between Horus and the
bubbles around the three Terran lynchpins.
Horus: Aliarka Magara Folariaminusata
Row 2 Box 3 Energy flies from Horus to the lynchpins.
Horus: Valiset Naminare Tositas
Row 3 Box 1 A doorway opens up.
Row 3 Box 2 One of the trolls looks at it, and points it out to
another one of the trolls.
Row 3 Box 3 The three lynchpin's have their eyes glow and begin to
float up, arms splayed wide. They appear to be in pain.
Row 3 Box 4 Jesra hugs Vesuvius who is gasping for air in the tiny
bubble.
Tuesday, June 17, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 85 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Horus turns around and throws up his hands to shield
himself from the apples.
Horus: What?!
Row 1Box 2 Jesra smiles and hits him again. This time a bunch of
ferrets come out and begin to bit him.
Horus: WHAT?!
Row 1 Box 3 Horus is suddenly lit on fire, his eyes glowing and the
Ferrets burn.
Jesra: Take that! What ever that is.
Row 2 Box 1 Horus raises his hand and a wall of fire appears between
himself and Jesra.
Row 2 Box 2 Jesra falls back from the heat.
Jesra: Arg!
Row 2 Box 3 Pete looks concerned, hands on the ends of the Bubble.
Row 3 Box 4 Jesra gets up, her face looking grim.
Jesra: Let's try that again.
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra points the wand and liquid comes out.
Row 3 Box 2 The flames rise higher, knocking Jesra and Horus
backward.
Row 3 Box 3 Horus shrieks at the Troll guards pointing at her.
Horus: Take that wand from her!
Saturday, June 14, 2014
Thursday, June 12, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 84 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Horus picks Sluice up and throws him, scattering dust
everywhere as he does.
Row 1 Box 2 Vesuvius throws several lightning bolts through the wand
into the halberd still stuck into Horus.
Row 1 Box 3 Horus waves a hand and encapsulates Vesuvius into a tiny
bubble of force.
Horus: That should take care of you.
Row 2 Box 1 Horus looks at Pete, Klery and Forsalio and extends his
hand.
Horus: And now we undo this nonsense once and for all.
Row 2 Box 2 Horus lifts them up into the air. Pete looks upset.
Forsalio looks accepting. Klery looks fearful.
Pete: Hey!
Row 2 Box 3 Jesra looks upset.
Jesra: Don't you dare! Put them down!
Row 3 Box 1 Horus begins to cast magic at the three lynchpins.
Horus: Changes must be made, but don't worry. This won't hurt.
Much.
Row 3 Box 2 Jesra runs over and picks up Amanda's wand. Vesuvius's
sphere is getting smaller.
Row 3 Box 3 Jesra points the wand at Horus and a stream full of
apple's pours out of it, hitting Horus in the head.
Tuesday, June 10, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 83 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Horus raises his head and roars in pain.
Horus: Oh you'll pay for that little troll.
Row 1 Box 2 Horus stares at Sluice, beams coming out of his eyes.
Horus: This is the end.
Row 2 Box 1 Sluice begins to turn to dust.
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius looks with horror.
Vesuvius: Sluice!
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius runs down and grabs Amanda's wand and shoots it
at Horus.
Vesuvius: Take that your largeness!
Row 3 Box 1 The blast bounces off of Horus.
Row 3 Box 2 Horus looks disdainful of Vesuvius.
Horus: That didn't work very well for Amanda. Do you really think it
will work better for you?
Row 3 Box 3 Sluice, though much of him has turned to dust, jabs the
halberd into Horus a second time.
Saturday, June 7, 2014
Thursday, June 5, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 82 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Horus and the others all look at each other.
Row 2 Box 1 Horus shakes his head.
Horus: Why am I not surprised? Let no one ever say that I am not
merciful.
Row 2 Box 2 Amanda laughs.
Row 2 Box 3 Horus is extending his hand with power to attack Sluice
but turns his head in annoyance to look at Amanda.
Horus: You dare?
Row 2 Box 4 Amanda looks terrified.
Row 3 Box 1 Amanda sneers and reaches for her wand.
Row 3 Box 2 Amanda calls power and sends a lightning bolt at Horus.
Amanda: Your mercy. I remember how 'merciful' you really are!
Row 3 Box 3 The lightning bolt bounces harmlessly off of him.
Horus: I'm sorry. Was that meant to do something?
Row 4 Box 1 Horus's eyes glow.
Row 4 Box 2 Amanda turns instantly to ash.
Horus: Goodbye Amanda.
Row 4 Box 3 While Horus has been distracted, Sluice grabs one of the Halberds from the Guard's hands.
Row 4 Box 4 Sluice charges Horus and stabs him in the back.
Tuesday, June 3, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 81 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Nungo watches pleased at a cheering throng outside of his
window that looks up at the sky.
Row 1 Box 2 There is a painting on the wall of a ship at sea in a
calm storm.
Row 1 Box 3 The painting changes to storm clouds.
Row 1 Box 4 Nungo looks from the crowd to the painting.
Row 2 Box 1 Nungo sighs.
Row 2 Box 2 Empty from the same perspective as the previous box but
Nungo is not there.
Row 3 Box 1 Sluice looks up, looking worried.
Horus (Off Panel): I have been very patient up to now.
Row 3 Box 2 Vesuvius looks up from the Amanda's shoulder. Amanda
looks wickedly pleased, Vesuvius looks forlorn.
Horus (Off Panel): I have disdained the use of more vulgar magicks in
hope of a stronger world bond. But your 'success' here prevents
that.
Row 3 Box 3 Pete and Jesra look up defiant, Jesra more so than Pete.
Horus: (Off Panel) No matter. I can solve this problem in a
multitude of ways. Surrender now, and I will show some mercy.
Row 3 Box 4 The trolls grab their weapons and get into formation,
ready to charge.