A chronology of my attempts at creative writings, and my attempts to present those to the world at large (ie selling them)
Tuesday, October 27, 2015
[Script] Unfood - Page 33
CONTINUED: 33.
He is upset for a moment as he points his face at the screen
and some print outs. He directs his visual sensory
apparatus known as eyes at the screen and then the print
outs.
FREIGHT
No. No. That can’t be right.
He checks both a second time.
SHOT – CLOSE UP – CALORIES.
Shows the words “Number of Calories Needed to Survive:”
SHOT – CLOSE UP – FOOD INVENTORY
Shows the words “Caloric Inventory”
SHOT – WIDE – INT MED BAY – DAY
Freight swears and scatters the print outs. He calms himself
and gathers up the print outs.
SHOT – WIDE – INT MED BAY – DAY
Time has passed. He adds up the numbers a third time.
He reads the numbers a final time and shakes his head.
FREIGHT
God DAMN it.
Freight starts to break down and cry.
He lays his head on the desk and is utterly miserable.
Camera departs in a wide shot showing him resting his head
on the desk, staring despondently at the wall.
SCENE 2 - SHOT – INT – BRIDGE – DAY
Freight reads the sensors pointed at various parts of the
ship trying to find more food. He notices two sections of
the ship, and gets nothing.
FREIGHT
OK Bob. Wait, I know. Let’s try
the bridge.
(CONTINUED)
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