A chronology of my attempts at creative writings, and my attempts to present those to the world at large (ie selling them)
Thursday, September 24, 2015
[Script] Unfood - Page 24
24.
INT – CORRIDOR – NIGHT
The elevator opens to a corridor. He turns around
carefully. He hears some scurrying in the corner and
listens in that general direction.
INT – CLOSE UP – NIGHT
A rat snuffles around in the corner. It finds a small bit
of cheese and nibbles on it.
INT – CLOSE UP – FREIGHT’S FACE
Freight finally sees what it is and is rather
disgusted. Then his face slowly becomes resolute.
INT – CLOSE UP – RAT
Rat continues to nibble, blissfully unawares.
INT – CORRIDOR –
Freight slowly sneaks up on the rat.
INT- CLOSE UP – RAT
Rat looks up, concerned.
INT – CLOSE UP – FREIGHT
Freight smiles maniacally.
INT – CORRIDOR – NIGHT
Freight draws his blaster. He points it at the rat and
shoots it several times, reducing the rat to a crispy
critter. He picks up the rat, most of which is now
ash. Freight cries in frustration, pounding his hand into
the wall; one of which has a sharp spike in it. Freight
injures his hand.
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