I have a swollen lower lip making reading ...difficult. We'll resume next week. Likely will record several in a row.
Saturday, July 26, 2014
Thursday, July 24, 2014
[Script] Tossing Grenades at Windmills - Page 2
Fade
In:
EXT.
DOWNTOWN OFFICE PARK – AFTERNOON
A
giant robot walks down the street. It vaporizes a car. A large
hovercycle pulls up and INORIA and HAWKQUEEN get off.
FRANK
NOBLE walks down the street, speaking into a cellphone.
FRANK
Yes, I've nearly got it
working. Its pretty amazing stuff. So far its refracted literally
everything that I've thrown at it. This could mean unlimited room
temperature superconductivity...
Frank
ignores the robot. Just another day and battle in the city.
Hawkqueen and Inoria do battle against the robot in the background
while DOCTOR SHADOWS gets out of a black sedan and follows Frank into
his lab. Frank does not see Dr. shadows.
INT.
LAB - AFTERNOON
Frank
sighs, puts on a pair of goggles and fires up a laser which bounces
off a thin sheet of something shiny and tinfoil like. (Reflexium.)
Doctor
Shadows watches this, still unseen.
FRANK
If I coat it with a
little of this... (Sprays something on the sheet)
The
robot walks by the window. Inoria is hanging onto its leg, banging
on it with something bulky and metal to utterly no effect.
Frank
tries the laser again, this time it is much stronger.
Tuesday, July 22, 2014
[Script] Tossing Grenades at Windmills - Page 1
Copyright 2014 Red Anvil Amalgamated
“Tossing
Grenades at Windmills”
Screenplay
by
T.C.
Ricks
Reading
Draft
2006
Major
Characters
Frank
Noble (Grenademan) - A brilliant scientist in his late twenties;
smart, idealistic, moderately handsome but hopelessly socially inept.
His hidden alterego, "GRENADEMAN" always speaks in capital
letters, possesses no fear whatsoever, and has a mirthful bizarrely
screwed up perspective of good, evil and reality. He is insane.
Doc
Shadows (Archelius deShade) - A strong powerful man, with noble
features he always hides behind a gas mask and fedora. One of the
first metas, he has telepathically tricked Death into leaving him
alone to give himself immortality. He hates what metas have done to
the world and is determined to make it a better place. At all costs.
Hawkqueen
(Katrina Dasalgo) - A beautiful empath of the past generation. She
is the paramount protector of the city and a skilled warrioress. She
works with two empathicly linked hawks, Trouble and Double Trouble.
Inoria
- (Jaycee Defoe) - A technowizard, sexy with a bizarre sense of
humor. She is the protege of hawkqueen and hopelessly smitten by
Frank Noble, despite his insanity. Likes things that explode.
Chainsaw
Fred (Fred Noble) - Hates crazy idiots in costume. Owns a hardware
store. Frank's pragmatic older brother. Mechanically brilliant,
willing to do what must be done to protect his family. Even Frank
when he puts on a costume.
J.R.R.
Thorne - The villain. He is determined to trick Shadows into
building a device which will allow him to steal the technological
secrets of a generation and make him a very rich man. He hates metas
and has developed a powerful PAC to help him do so.
Saturday, July 19, 2014
Love Letter to Julia #1
We are reading Dangerous Liasons together, and my lovely wife requested I write her a love letter. I did. I am sharing it with the world for our first anniversery tmrw.
Thursday, July 17, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 94 - Chapter 6
Dedicated to my lovely wife Julia Carlson Ricks. This was originally part of a deal for a cover and a graphic novel with an artist who is a friend of mine, but alas, she had other projects she had to move on to and reverted the rights of the script to me. Someday I may ping her and ask to share with you the delightful art she did for the first chapter, but for now, words will have to suffice.
I'm not sure when, if ever, I'll be able to have this put to art. Maybe a kickstarter someday but there are at least two other projects that must come before it; Forever West and a second Fate of Inglemia book. But at least I can share the script with you.
I hope you enjoyed. More content will appear from time to time here. Enjoy!
I'm not sure when, if ever, I'll be able to have this put to art. Maybe a kickstarter someday but there are at least two other projects that must come before it; Forever West and a second Fate of Inglemia book. But at least I can share the script with you.
I hope you enjoyed. More content will appear from time to time here. Enjoy!
Tuesday, July 15, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 93 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Vesuvius and Sluice look at an unaware Jesra and Pete.
Sluice: Still doesn't seem right that they can't know we're watchin
em.
Vesuvius: Yeah Nungo's a jerk.
Sluice: So why don't we just ignore him?
Vesuvius: Never know when he might be watching....
Row 1 Box 2 Vesuvius leaps up on Sluice's shoulder.
Vesuvius: Besides, if we disobey him he might erase their memories.
Sluice: Sigh.
Vesuvius: Hey. We'll do what we can.
Row 2 Box 1 Close up of Sluice and Vesuvius looking at each other
smiling.
Sluice: Like the wa-
Vesuvius: Hey shhhh! Remember what I said about him watching, he can
read lips.
Sluice: Heh.
Row 2 Box 2 Sluice and Vesuvius look peacefully at Jesra and Pete
kissing, wand in Jesra's hands.
-Fin
Saturday, July 12, 2014
Thursday, July 10, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 92 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Jesra looked at Pete.
Jesra: So....
Row 1 Box 2 Pete shrugged and smiled.
Pete: They said that they would be back in a few weeks when they put
things back together on the other side.
Row 1 Box 3 Jesra shook her head.
Jesra: It seems...dumb. We should be learning things. Preparing for
things.
Row 2 Box 1 Pete hugs Jesra.
Pete: They just have their own way of doing things I guess.
Row 2 Box 2 Jesra looks up at Pete.
Jesra: So what does it mean that you're a 'lynchpin'? Do you have
magical powers or something now?”
Row 2 Box 3 Pete tries extending his finger to zap a rock.
Row 3 Box 1 Nothing happens.
Row 3 Box 2 Pete shrugs.
Pete: I guess not.
Row 3 Box 3 Jesra smiles.
Jesra: Look.
Row 3 Box 4 They both see Amanda's wand lying on the ground.
Tuesday, July 8, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 91 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Narration off Panel: Everything changed that day.
A row of troll prisoners walk through a portal in chains looking
dismayed.
Sluice and Vesuvius look on, quite pleased.
Row 1 Box 2 Narration off Panel: And while the world was not
perfect...
Slither climbs out of the trashcan.
Row 1 Box 3 Narration off Panel: A temporary balance was achieved.
Slither moves through a portal back home.
Row 2 Box 1 Narration off Panel: And a bridge between two worlds was
created.
Nungo shakes hands with Forsalio with Pete, Jesra and Klery next to
him.
Row 2 Box 2 Narration off Panel: That was good, because quite
frankly we could use all the help we could get....
Forsalio waves and heads through a portal.
Row 2 Box 3 Narration off Panel: And for a time, the two young humans
could resume their lives and for a time pretend that things were
normal.
Jesra and Pete looked at each other, smiling.
Saturday, July 5, 2014
Thursday, July 3, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 90 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1: All three of them close their eyes.
Row 1 Box 2: Horus throws Sluice backward a great deal.
Horus: Insolent troll!
Row 1 Box 3: A huge amount of energy surrounded by Helvetica
characters, floating papers, and shadow images of the modern world
surround the three.
Row 2 Box 1: Lightning pours the other direction in the link that
Horus has established with them for the ritual.
Row 2 Box 2 Horus begins to burn, and roars upward in pain.
Row 2 Box 3 Horus is reduced to a screaming skull.
Row 3 Box 1 Horus is reduced to nothing but a pile of ash.
Row 3 Box 2 The trolls fighting for Horus all look back in horror.
Row 3 Box 3 The trolls all throw down their weapons.
Tuesday, July 1, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 89 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Pete tries pushing through the bubble in frustration.
Row 1 Box 2 His hand goes through.
Pete: We can get out!
Row 1 Box 3 Forsalio and Klery see this.
Row 1 Box 4 They all start to get out.
Row 2 Box 1 Horus sees this and turns around.
Horus: Oh no you don't.
Row 2 Box 2 Pete gets a look of inspiration on his face.
Row 2 Box 3 Flashback: Pete sees two trolls talking.
Troll 1: That's why they keep losing right? They keep trying to
impose their rules on the world, but each world has its own rules.
Row 2 Box 4 Pete looks at the other two, “Join hands!”
Row 3 Box 1 Horus begins the ritual a second time.
Horus: Aline, Aline, Aloxitas-AAAAAAAAAARG!
Row 3 Box 2 Sluice slams a halbard into Horus's foot.
Row 3 Box 3 They all join hands.
Row 3 Box 4 Forsalio looks at Pete.
Forsalio “Now what?”
Row 4 Box 1 Pete looks confused.
Pete: I'm not sure....
Row 4 Box 2 Pete looks at Klery.
Pete: Maybe if we just....think about making the world safe?
Concentrate?
Row 4 Box 3 Forsalio shrugs.
Row 4 Box 4 Klery nods.
Klery: I will pray with you.
Saturday, June 28, 2014
Thursday, June 26, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 88 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Box 1 Vesuvius unleashes a powerful lightning bolt at Horus.
Row 1 Box 2 Horus cringes but does not stop even as his flesh is
burning. In the background, the three lynchpin's have small but
subtle features making them look a bit more like Horus.
Horus: Avinal Avinal Avinale
Row 2 Box 1 Nungo points his fingers into the air and assumes an
almost martial arts like stance. A battle is raging all around him
between the fae forces and Horus's.
Row 2 Box 2 A vortex of intermixing fire and ice join Vesuvius's
lightning striking Horus.
Row 2 Box 3 Horus whirls around to face Vesuvius and Nungo.
Row 3 Box 1 Horus slams his hands together and is surrounded by a
nimbus of power. Very subtly in the background the lynchpins can be
seen reverting back to normal.
Row 3 Box 2 Fire, Ice and Lightning slam into Vesuvius and Nungo,
slamming them both backward.
Tuesday, June 24, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Page 87 - Chapter 6
Row 1 Nungo steps out of the portal. Behind him is a whole line of
'good' trolls, imps and other fae creatures from the other side of
the veil. Nungo looks annoyed but determined.
Row 2 Box 1 Close up of Nungo's fingers snapping.
SNAP!
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius's bubble pops and suddenly he can breath. Jesra
looks very happy.
Row 2 Box 3 Sluice is surrounded by a glow.
Row 2 Box 4 Sluice is now entirely whole.
Row 3 Box 1 Horus looks down from the corner of his eye and looks
concerned but does not stop his ritual.
Horus: Atila Zedemra Fortilana
Row 3 Box 2 The trolls working for Horus immediately turn around and
begin battling the forces that Nungo has brought with him.
Row 3 Box 3 Jesra reaches down and picks up the wand.
Row 3 Box 4 Jesra points the wand at Horus and a stream of boxing
gloves come out.
Row 4 Box 1 Horus looks annoyed at their impact but doesn't stop.
Horus: Atinea Forical Tortuga
Row 4 Box 2 Vesuvius smiles on Jesra's shoulder and opens his hand.
Vesuvius: You're a natural but would you mind?
Row 4 Box 3 Jesra looks mildly chagrined, smiles and hands him the
wand.
Row 4 Box 4 Vesuvius takes it and smiles wickedly.
Vesuvius: Thanks!
Saturday, June 21, 2014
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