Emily runs out of time.
Saturday, February 22, 2014
Thursday, February 20, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 54
Row 1 The cop yells and dodges out of
the way.
Row 2 Box 1 Vesuvius looks at Jesra.
Vesuvius: Why are the police after you?
Row 2 Box 2 Jesra looks embarrassed and
looks up with her hand behind her head.
Row 2 Box 3 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Well…I’m kind of a thief.
Row 2 Box 4 Vesuvius smiles but crosses
his arms.
Vesuvius: Kind of?
Row 3 Box 1 The cop yells into the
radio.
Row 3 Box 2 The operator looks
concerned.
Row 3 Box 3 The operator talks into the
radio.
Row 4 Panel broken up of several cops
in subdivided panel receiving the message, looking concerned.
Radio Message: Known Suspect. Jesra
Lopolis, On Strength Enhancing Drugs. Threw a Car at Responding
Officer.
One of the Officers in the Panel: Car?!
Tuesday, February 18, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 53
Row 1 Box 1 The group of heroes goes
around a corner.
Row 1 Box 2 A policeman looks at them
but only sees Pete and Jesra. Angle must be obvious enough to imply
that the policeman can’t see Vesuvius or Sluice even though they
are right in front of him.
Row 1 Box 3 Jesra spots the policeman
and looks nervous.
Row 1 Box 4 The policeman looks at
Jesra and begins to move towards them.
Row 2 Box 1 Jesra looks at Pete.
Jesra: Run!
Pete: Huh?!
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius rolls his eyes.
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks at Sluice,
“We don’t have time for this. Can you take care of them?”
Row 2 Box 4 Sluice nods and starts to
reach for a car.
Row 3 & Row 4 – Shown from
policeman’s angle where it appears that Jesra is lifting the car
because she hands in the air due to yelling at Pete. The car is
upside down at an angle, held by Vesuvius, but also is an homage to
the old Superman comic cover of issue 1. (If this is artistically
impossible or ugly, just so an invisible car over Pete and Jesra’s
head upside down heading toward the cop.)
Saturday, February 15, 2014
Thursday, February 13, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 52
Row 1 A portal opens and Jesra, Pete,
Sluice and Vesuvius walk through into a crowded area. No one seems
to notice. Vesuvius is riding Jesra’s shoulder.
Row 2 Box 1 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Are you sure that no one can see
us?
Vesuvius: Yup.
Jesra: And they can’t see Pete or I
either?
Vesuvius: Er…mabye.
Jesra: And it will wear off.
Vesuvius: Yup.
Jesra: So what do we do next?
Row 2 Box 2 Close up of Vesuvius
looking sheepish.
Vesuvius: I don’t know. I mean….we
need to find the third seal. But beyond what the little bright light
says, this time I’m clueless. Sometimes we can learn little things
that can help…but in this case…your guess is as good as mine.
Row 3 Box 1 Sluice growls and sits down
in frustration on a nearby curve.
Vesuvius hops up on his shoulder.
Row 3 Box 2 Vesuvius pats Sluice’s
neck.
Vesuvius: I understand big guy.
Amanda: Understand what?
Vesuvius: We’re not normally this in
the dark. We normally have a lot of time to investigate this kind of
thing, but now….
Amanda: You don’t know what to do.
Vesuvius: Yeah pretty much. For some
reason we’re having problems finding the third seal.
Wednesday, February 12, 2014
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Castles in the Air and Cursebreaker
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And the Poetry collection, Chaff in the Gear Box.
Cursebreaker is about a girl who works with her father to break the fire mage lock on firearms by making a weapon that does not need fire based gunpowder. The mages don't care but she can defend herself and uses the new weapon to do so.
Castles in the Air is about Elery, who lives in the besieged human town of Spielglase, who is tested by the elves and thinks she is to learn magic. On the way, however, she is given a rude shock and works to return home.
Other items for sale include:
The epic poem I, Odysseus.
A collection of poems: Spiders in the Sugar Factory.
The demented children's book, Billy's First Bolt Gun.
The previously published stories Waiting For the Monsters to Die and Mr. Hamburger.
The highly magical setting book, the Fate of Inglemia.
And the Poetry collection, Chaff in the Gear Box.
Tuesday, February 11, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 59
Row 1 Box 1 Slither whispers in
Amanda’s ear again. Amanda looks curious.
Row 1 Box 2 Amanda looks up and then
out through the window at Forsalio.
Amanda: Yes. You’re right. We can
do some more things to distract him.
Row 1 Box 3 She looks over at a group
of three scantily clad women.
Row 1 Box 4 Amanda gets a broad wicked
grin.
Amanda: And I think I have just the
thing in mind.
Row 2 Box 1 The scene shifts to Klerely
who looks into a window at a music box forlornely.
Row 2 Box 2 Wider shot shows several
confused police officers looking around desperately.
Cop 1: Maybe they used a helicopter?
Cop 2: Did you SEE a helicopter?
Cop 1: No.
Cop 1: Then shut up.
Row 3 Box 1 Klerely looks at the
officers as they walk by, interested for a moment.
Row 3 Box 2 Klerely looks forlornly
back at the music box.
Row 3 Box 3 Close up of her face,
looking well worn and sad. She sighs.
Row 3 Box 4 Klerely moves on past the
window.
Row 4 Box 1 Sluice lands in a small
park, scattering flowers and a bit of concrete in all directions.
Row 4 Box 2 He gently sets the other
three down though the looked slightly stunned.
Row 4 Box 3 Pete and Jesra slowly stand
up, trying to orient themselves.
Pete: Was that really necessary?
Row 4 Box 4 Sluice looks chagrined and
looks down.
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 51
Row 1 Box 1 Forsalio looks at Amanda.
He looks down at some papers.
Forsalio: I will want to have my cousin
take a look at this…
Row 1 Box 2 Amanda looks at him.
Amanda: Your cousin?
Row 1 Box 3 Forasolio tries to look
impressive and fails.
Forsalio: He’s a lawyer.
Row 2 Box 1 Amanda looks surprised a
moment.
Row 2 Box 2 Amanda suddenly bursts out
laughing. Slither laughs in the background.
Row 2 Box 3 Forsalio looks annoyed.
Forsalio: What’s so funny?
Row 3 Box 1 Amanda laughs a bit less.
Amanda: No, nothing. I understand your
concern. I was just worried you had changed your mind and was glad
you didn’t.
Row 3 Box 2 Forsalio still looks
dubious.
Forsalio: Oh.
Row 3 Box 3 Amanda waves to Forsalio as
he walks off.
Row 3 Box 4 Amanda and Slither both
look at each other again.
Row 3 Box 5 They both start laughing
again.
Saturday, February 8, 2014
Thursday, February 6, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 50
Row 1 Wide Box 1 – Police officer
watching Amanda and Forsalio speak with a jack hammer in the
background.
Row 1 Box 3 Forsalio frowns.
Forsalio: I don’t know…
Row 1 Box 4 Amanda puts her hand on his
shoulder and smiles.
Amanda: You can trust us.
Row 1 Box 5 Forsalio looks slightly
less convinced and says something.
Forsalio: That is what all of your
people say.
Row 2 Box 1 Amanda looks rather
annoyed.
Amanda: Of course you can. We’ve
already -
Row 2 Box 2 Forsalio laughs.
Forsalio: Really?
Row 2 Box 3 Amanda puts on a fake smile
and says something but is cut off.
Row 2 Box 4 Forsalio looks VERY angry.
Forsalio: Don’t you LIE to me.
Row 2 Box 5 Amanda looks innocent.
Amanda: But I’m not.
Row 3 Box 1 Wide – Jackhammer stops
and guy starts to replace it.
Row 3 Box 2 Forsalio points a finger at
Amanda.
Forsalio: Don’t you lie to me! I can
tell you’re up to something!
Row 3 Box 3 Slither skips up Forsalio’s
arm.
Row 3 Box 4 Forsalio looks terrified.
Forsalio: “What’s that?”
Row 3 Box 5 Slither moves to Forsalio’s
right shoulder while Forsalio looks right.
Row 4 Box 1 Amanda puts her hand on
Forsalio’s right shoulder.
Amanda: Everything is fine. Its just
your imagination.
Row 4 Box 2 Forsalio looks at his
shoulder only to see Amanda’s hand there.
Forsalio: I suppose…
Row 4 Box 3 Amanda puts her other hand
on Forsalio’s shoulder and looks deeply into his eyes.
Amanda: So will you accept our offer?
Row 4 Box 4 Forsalio looks dejected, as
if he should not be doing what he is doing but can’t understand
why.
Forsalio: Of…course…I suppose.
Row 4 Box 5 Amanda smiles as her eyes
glow a bit.
Amanda: Excellent.
Tuesday, February 4, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 49
Row 1 Box 1 A toy monkey is squashed by
an accordion.
Row 1 Box 2 A large cement block
smashes the toy to bits, dropped from the top of the panel.
Row 1 Box 3 A tiny child looks down at
the toy, water filling their eyes.
Row 2 Box 1 A construction worker looks
down at the child, looks sad and shrugs.
Row 2 Box 2 Forsalio looks at them and
at Amanda in the distance.
Forsalio: This hardly looks like
benevolent progress to me. And besides…I like the open air. The
exercise. Its good for me.
Row 2 Box 3 Amanda rolls her eyes.
Row 2 Box 4 Amanda looks down at the
ground suddenly, “What in the world is that?”
Row 3 Box 1 Forsalio looks confused and
looks down.
Forsalio: Huh?
Row 3 Box 2 Amanda reaches over and
casts a stun bolt at the construction worker.
Row 3 Box 3 The construction worker
falls down unconscious and the child giggles.
Row 4 Box 1 Amanda points at the
giggling child.
Amanda: See? She’s fine.
Row 4 Box 2 Forsalio looks dubious.
Forsalio: I guess. But why me?
Row 4 Box 3 Amanda puts her arm behind
Forsalio and leads him off.
Amanda: Think of how many people you’ll
be employing.
Monday, February 3, 2014
[Naked City Atlanta] The Pounding of the Kazoos -"Obsession"
Author's Note: Even now, as I post this, Naked City Atlanta is going on. The word this month is Obsession. Even though I can't be there, I'm writing this post to appear as if I were there in spirit.
There it was, the pounding of the kazoos, throbbing in my brain; an obsession that I could not get rid of. Some people who look at the polar vortex gain a deep insight into the weather of the world; and some go mad. Some just start running and never stop. I'm one of the ones that went berserk.
It started small, you must understand. The weather department at a news station is small, usually consisting of one or two people. KQWAK was a bit larger than most, given the major metropolitan area that was Bismark North Dakota, so we had four. Alright, perhaps it wasn't the size of our city so much as the fact that we had weather that was chaotic...and the weather girls were all rather attractive. Except myself. I am neither a girl nor am I attractive.
But I was here first.
I stared at the vortex as it swirled and swirled on my little screen, phantomly imposed on the green-screen as I stared at it, pointing it out with my laser pen. I was talking about the polar bears in the air as I stood in front of a stupid screen. I was naked, baring my soul to these people. And they didn't think it was real...the monstrous ursine cacophony soaring up above the stratosphere, ready to turn us all into so much lunch chow.
I'm not supposed to care about this. A polar vortex is just a weather term for air that decides to go south for the winter in a place it never should be, but I know the polar bears are angry. I said, I said to the guy I bought my car from, I said, "I want something that looks great and gets really shitty gas millage! Fuck the environment!" And I did, because you wouldn't believe what you can earn standing in front of a green screen and pretending you know what the hell you're talking about. Fine, so I paid that little pimple for the answers to every test, but have you seen the other women in the news room?
I mean seriously.
And weather groupies? I mean, there is nothing like getting serviced with a girl just in college who goes all gushy like a fruitloop with the magical words,"Castroverius Cumulonimbus Cirrico." Seriously. Clouds. Tell them you're on TV and mention a few cloud names to them and they're all over you.
So I'm driving in my new car, hot blond on the carpet content as can be, humming with the hummer, and I shit you not, there is this coca cola billboard, and this polar bear, this polar bear is staring at me, as if I have personally
The bears, their claws,
The bears, their maws
The whirling vortex of infinite doom
I spot beneath myself a white wasteland
Where none, but the most incompetent
Let the people run free
Frozen in their tracks
Frozen in their cars
Frozen in all of the ways that matter
And I know,
I know in my heart
That I have been eaten by the bears
And they have stolen my soul.
What does it mean? What does it all mean?
Not a god damn thing except that I need to finish my coffee and that I need to get somewhere considerably warmer. I wonder what the pay is for weather men in Miami....
There it was, the pounding of the kazoos, throbbing in my brain; an obsession that I could not get rid of. Some people who look at the polar vortex gain a deep insight into the weather of the world; and some go mad. Some just start running and never stop. I'm one of the ones that went berserk.
It started small, you must understand. The weather department at a news station is small, usually consisting of one or two people. KQWAK was a bit larger than most, given the major metropolitan area that was Bismark North Dakota, so we had four. Alright, perhaps it wasn't the size of our city so much as the fact that we had weather that was chaotic...and the weather girls were all rather attractive. Except myself. I am neither a girl nor am I attractive.
But I was here first.
I stared at the vortex as it swirled and swirled on my little screen, phantomly imposed on the green-screen as I stared at it, pointing it out with my laser pen. I was talking about the polar bears in the air as I stood in front of a stupid screen. I was naked, baring my soul to these people. And they didn't think it was real...the monstrous ursine cacophony soaring up above the stratosphere, ready to turn us all into so much lunch chow.
I'm not supposed to care about this. A polar vortex is just a weather term for air that decides to go south for the winter in a place it never should be, but I know the polar bears are angry. I said, I said to the guy I bought my car from, I said, "I want something that looks great and gets really shitty gas millage! Fuck the environment!" And I did, because you wouldn't believe what you can earn standing in front of a green screen and pretending you know what the hell you're talking about. Fine, so I paid that little pimple for the answers to every test, but have you seen the other women in the news room?
I mean seriously.
And weather groupies? I mean, there is nothing like getting serviced with a girl just in college who goes all gushy like a fruitloop with the magical words,"Castroverius Cumulonimbus Cirrico." Seriously. Clouds. Tell them you're on TV and mention a few cloud names to them and they're all over you.
So I'm driving in my new car, hot blond on the carpet content as can be, humming with the hummer, and I shit you not, there is this coca cola billboard, and this polar bear, this polar bear is staring at me, as if I have personally
The bears, their claws,
The bears, their maws
The whirling vortex of infinite doom
I spot beneath myself a white wasteland
Where none, but the most incompetent
Let the people run free
Frozen in their tracks
Frozen in their cars
Frozen in all of the ways that matter
And I know,
I know in my heart
That I have been eaten by the bears
And they have stolen my soul.
What does it mean? What does it all mean?
Not a god damn thing except that I need to finish my coffee and that I need to get somewhere considerably warmer. I wonder what the pay is for weather men in Miami....
Saturday, February 1, 2014
Thursday, January 30, 2014
Seventh Seal - Chapter 3 - Page 48
Row 1 – Vesuvius, Pete, Jesra and
Sluice all look at each other and smile, with confidence. A portal
lies beyond them.
Row 2 Box 1
Amanda looks at Forsalio.
Amanda: I have a financial proposition
for you. Have you ever considered opening a chain of restaurants?
Row 2 Box 2 Forsalio puts his hand
under his chin.
Row 2 Box 3 Forsalio grins, it is clear
that he loves the idea. The greed is visible in his eyes.
Forsalio: I’m listening.
Row 3 Box 1 The portal darkens and dry
cracks appear over the surface.
Row 3 Box 2 (Wide) The portal pops
like a soap bubble and suddenly Vesuvius, Sluice, Amanda and Pete
look rather worried.
Tuesday, January 28, 2014
Seventh Seal - Chapter 3 - Page 47
Row 1 Box 1 Amanda and Slither step out
of the portal in front of the museum. It is daylight.
Row 1 Box 2 Amanda points out Forsalio
to Slither.
Amanda: There he is.
Row 1 Box 3 Slither snickers and
follows behind her as it shows all but Amanda’s ankle off panel.
Row 2 Box 1 Amanda walks up to Forsalio
and taps him on the shoulder.
Row 2 Box 2 Forsalio jumps and turns
around.
Forsalio: Huh? Whazzat? Who? Where?
Row 2 Box 3 Forsalio calms down. A
little.
Forsalio: What, did you just pop out of
thin air lady? Would you like a hot dog?
Row 3 Box 1 Amanda smiles wickedly.
Amanda: You could say something like
that.
Row 3 Box 2 Forsalio looks a bit
confused. Slither dances on the hot dog cart waving his arms and
grinning but Forsalio doesn’t see him.
Forsalio: What?
Row 3 Box 3 Amanda smiles again,
ignoring Slither. She puts her hand on Forsalio’s shoulder.
Amanda: Yes, I would like a hot dog. I
imaging someone like you earns quite a bit of money at the hot dog
game…
Saturday, January 25, 2014
Thursday, January 23, 2014
Seventh Seal - Chapter 3 - Page 46
Row 1 Box 1 Nungo, Jesra, Pete,
Vesuvius and Sluice all sit around a well stocked, candle lit dining
table.
Vesuvius: So then I said to the Fairy,
‘Why no officer, I don’t know where this elephant came from.’
Row 1 Box 2 (Wide) Everyone laughs out
loud.
Row 2 Box 1 Jesra and Pete look at each
other romantically.
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius elbows Sluice
knowingly and smiles.
Row 2 Box 3 Sluice smiles and elbows
Vesuvius knowingly.
Row 2 Box 4 Vesuvius flies through the
air.
Row 3 Box 1 Pete has a shocked and
concerned look on his face.
Row 3 Box 2 Vesuvius lands in a large
bowl of mashed potatoes.
Row 3 Box 3 Potatoes cover Nungo’s
face. He does not look happy.
Row 4 Box 1 Jesra starts to giggle.
Row 4 Box 2 (wide) Everyone is laughing
again, even Nungo.
Tuesday, January 21, 2014
Seventh Seal - Chapter 3 - Page 45
Horus’s Throne Room
Row 1 Box 1 – Horus looks into the
pool and frowns at the sign of the seven in the sky.
Row 1 Box 2 – Slither and Amanda
watch very quietly and nervously from the sidelines.
Row 1 Box 3 – Horus looks into the
pool and sees a flame douse though it is vague and featureless since
he cannot scry into their realm just yet.
Row 1 Box 4 – Horus frowns.
Row 2 Box 1 – Slither and Amanda look
at each other nervously. There is camaraderie in doom.
Row 2 Box 2 – Power begins to build
up in Horus’s hands.
Row 2 Box 3 – Slither looks nervous
but Amanda looks positively terrified but she is more afraid to flee
than she is to stay. For now.
Row 3 Box 1 – Horus spots an empty
space at the museum and looks puzzled a moment.
Row 3 Box 2 – Time winds backwards as
the sands of an hourglass in the pool flow upward.
Row 3 Box 3 – Horus spots Amanda and
Pete enter the portal after Vesuvius.
Row 3 Box 4 – Horus laughs and howls
at the broken moon.
Row 4 Box 1- Horus waves his hand and
dismisses the images in the pool.
Row 4 Box 2 -Horus looks at Amanda and
Slither. Slither has no reaction at all, Amanda looks very careful.
Row 4 Box 3 -Horus opens a portal of
his own and points toward it.
Horus: There is a seal lost to them.
Go and seize the advantage. While there is still time.
Row 4 Box 4 - Amanda and Slither do not
hesitate, and run for the portal as fast as they can.
Saturday, January 18, 2014
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