Thursday, October 13, 2016
[Script] Sentinel Chronicles - November Project - Act 1 - Scene 4
Andrew: We all square?
Curt: Aye Captain.
Andrew: This isn't a pirate ship Commander.
Curt: Aye.
Andrew: You aren't scottish.
Curt: Aye.
Andrew: How's the engine?
Curt: Aye. I mean....good.
Andrew:Warm em up and run all the diagnostics. We're gonna be gunning it for longer than I'd like.
Curt: Capn?
Tuesday, October 11, 2016
[Script] Sentinel Chronicles - November Project - Act 1 - Scene 3
Admiral Dweebnar: Good news Captain, you won't be flying a sortie against the Roids today.
Captain Andrew: That is good news. Commander Medley will be very happy. So what are we doing?
Admiral Dweebnar: Oubliette base is running short of vital supplies. You are to make a run up there and delivery them; then return.
Captain Andrew: Um...sir, no offense but...this sounds like a milk run. Why not have a drone or a Junior pilot do it?
Admiral Dweebnar: I would give you bullshit about R&R but we both know that's not something we can afford with our losses so I'll get straight to the point. There's a renegade human out there called Bregsaw. He's killing our people and robbing them. A bandit pure and simple.
Captain Andrew: So he is real?
Admiral Dweebnar: Very. And we can't afford a fighter escort; so you will need to dodge his fire both ways. Can you do that?
Captain Andrew (saluting) Aye sir.
Admiral Dweebnar: God speed Captain. This is an important one.
Captain Andrew: Don't worry sir. I won't let you down.
Amidral Dweebnar (nodding): Dismissed.
Sunday, October 9, 2016
Editing
Thursday, October 6, 2016
[Script] Sentinel Chronicles - November Project - Act 1 - Scene 2
ANDREW: It's been a great visit dad.
BENJAMIN: It's too short.
Andrew: It's always too short.
Benjamin: Every year gets worse. The roids just keep taking more and more.
Andrew: We're gonna turn it around.
Benjamin: You just keep coming back to me, do you understand?
Andrew: I understand Dad. I will.
Benjamin: A father shouldn't live longer than his son.
Andrew: I know Dad. I gotta go.
(They hug)
Tuesday, October 4, 2016
[Script] Sentinel Chronicles - November Project - Act 1 - Scene 1
ADMIRAL: What is it Thickdexter?
GENERAL: This. Place. Is. Hell.
ADMIRAL: You knew that when we sent you there. It's part of the conditions of your resignation.
GENERAL: I accepted this assignment with certain conditions....
ADMIRAL: I know that.
GENERAL: I've had hardship....
ADMIRAL: (sighs)
GENERAL: The men, the men here, think of the men, how they suffer, we're suffering together
ADMIRAL: I'll - (interrupted)
GENERAL: I know where the bodies are buried. We need that package.
ADMIRAL: (beat) I'll send someone. Our best pilot. Now stop calling me.
Saturday, October 1, 2016
[Poem] The Grass Is Mean - Part 1
(Inspired from the writings of my Forefathers)
Yard work kept me busy part of the time.
Part of the Time
Part
Part of the Time
I mowed the lawn
Mowed it
Moved the Lawn
Put down the fall fertilizer
Sprayed for weeds
Trimmed back the blackberry bush
Trimmed the pear tree.
I mowed the lawn
Mowed it
Moved the Lawn
The tomato plants are still in full bloom
I don't think they will last much longer
I mowed the lawn
Mowed it
Friday, September 30, 2016
Status Update
Fun times.
Thursday, September 29, 2016
[Script] Sentinel Chronicles - Project November - Roles
General Thickdexter - Exiled to a remote arctic outpost for fucking up and getting good men killed. Wants his creature comforts.
Captain Andrew Chopop - One of the most skilled remaining human pilots left alive. For now.
Benjamin Chopop - Andrew's father.
Commander Curt Medley - Andrew's short lived co pilot.
Bregsaw Grindface - Leader of the bandits who shoot down Andrew's plane.
Commander Teak Ogone - Tank Commander.
Ltn Angie Lyons - Tank Gunner
Sgt Apri Cotter - Tank EW Officer
Gunny - Tank Driver/ Engineer
Captain Muerte Poderosa - Special Forces Badass sent to rescue the Tank Crew.
Tuesday, September 27, 2016
[Script] Sentinel Chronicles - Project November - Outline
Here is the outline we're starting with for what he's filming in November.
Act 1 - Set Up
Scene 1 - As credits roll, two officers discuss how he was supposed to receive a cushy assignment from the front lines, and he owed him, and their vital supplies were cut, and the other officer caves and agrees to send 'vitally important supplies'
Scene 2 - Our hero the pilot has that endearing scene with his father.
Scene 3 - One of the two officers informs Pilot that he has a vital mission to deliver supplies.
Scene 4 - Plane is soaring over the plains. Witty banter between pilot and co pilot.
Scene 5 - Bandits crackerjack back and forth like Jawas about to get R2 and launch a missile at our Plane. Crash.
Act 2 - Man Down!
Scene 1 - Our man drags himself out of the wreckage.
Scene 2 - Tank Crew of 3 women and the single man. Witty banter. Characters established.
Scene 3 - Bad Ass receives an unvocalized call. Changes direction.
Scene 4 - Man drags himself across the plains, gets radio confirmation from Tank. He is saved!
Scene 5 - Firefight with bandits. Tank Commander killed. Pilot gets in tank. Goin home!
Scene 6 - Bad ass hears gun fight. Picks up pace.
Scene 7 - Tank busts a tread. Witty and panicked banter.
Scene 8 - Bandits attack! Tanks crew fires back.
Scene 9 - Bad ass begins killing bandits. Crew misintripts actions; thinks he's a roid and gets in the tank.
Scene 10 - Bad ass starts to vocalize that he is here to help. Tank crew can't here. Turns tank gun and obliterates a shocked bad ass.
Act 3 - On their own!
Scene 1 - Crew welds the treads in fire fight.
Scene 2 - Tank is on the role! Runs over a few bandits. Crush.
Scene 3 - Mine! Tank is blown to hell. Blackness.
Scene 4 - Bad ass isn't dead! Picks them up and saves them, grumbling.
Scene 5 - Hospital. One tank and pilot alive. Mourning.
Scene 6 - Supplies was luxury goods for commanders buddy. Pilot goes fruitloops. Bad ass punches Commander.
"You'll pay for this!"
"No I won't. I quit."
Friday, September 16, 2016
In the Near Now
*I am writing my seventh novel "Fruitloop and Frankenstein" for NaNoWrMo this November. It is the completion of my MOST important remaining bucket list goal and will turn this year into a personal success from my perspective.
*Spiders in the Sugar Factory has been laid out with AMAZING art from the amazing Lennie Gray Morries of Lenspeace. Cover needs to be done and a few other details, but it will be available by the end of the year. Emmit Other will be very happy. He might even write a poem about it. There is consideration of maybe also doing a limited edition print run try on Kick Starter instead of just Print on Demand at Createspace. We'll see.
I *SUCK* at selling stuff.
*Fruitloop and Frankenstein are going to be incorporated into a demi anthology that I'm likely to ask a few friends to contribute to; omnibused in the Heliotropic Book of Fairy Tales and MAYBE with a story about Grenademan in addition. Novella? Novel? Novelette? Grenademan in Candyland has been asking to be rewritten and modernized for a while.
*Kelly Higgs Glenn, my nominal Assistant Author/Factotum is slowly going through my backlog and helping me edit and determine which short stories are worthy of submission vs the Rubbish bin.
Interesting times.
*This blog isn't about rpg stuff, but re: Red Anvil Productions Cassie Carnage is doing a fantastic job resurrecting the long dead (all dead not mostly dead) T7 project a bit at a time.
*Helping my good pall Jay Welin on his baby "Sentinel Chronicles" and for my script stuff until the end of the year will produce updates, anecdotes and maybe some actual scripts. Jay does most of the story but I help with Dialog and act as a sounding board for his ideas.
That's all the news fit to print for now-
Oh. I might do a craptacular non sound edited podcast this weekend. Expect it to be EP Blingermeyered so you probably won't want to listening for a while, though I am going to try and get on Audible and Google. We'll see if I can do that with the crap equipment that I have.
Wednesday, August 31, 2016
The day of
So of course on the very day that I plan to start writing on my blog again I got hit by a major amount of work and training that it's supposed to be for my own benefit. Ignoring comments about politics and work then I'm not going to be making, I think the most interesting thing about this week is the fact that with the passing of my grandfather certain things that had been in the back of my mind telling him no become crystal clear. The first one is that I am going to write exactly 9 novels, and one of them becomes largely successful then I might write more but I think 9 is more than enough for any individual comma and I think that the ones I've chosen to write are all sound and something I plan to look forward to.
I don't really expect to become a wildly successful author but I've enjoyed the writing for itself and I think that I will continue to write on this blog, I think that I will continue to do script and I think that I'm going to help my friends with their projects and hopefully they will be able to help me with mine. One of the nice things about being self-published is that you Answer to No One except yourself. And I set the standard pretty high and for myself. The book of heliotropic fairy tales is going to be the best editing that I can do or get someone else for me to do Illustrated well and crafted well. It's going to be an anthology, now how large an apology I'm not yet sure but I have some aspirations in a pretty large. In the meantime starting next week training or no look here for more content and more interesting thoughts.
About half of my writing is going to be for robots sense after all if half of you are robots I should write to my audience. Have a great day.
Monday, August 22, 2016
On the patheticness of Gamergate
So if you were about journalistic ethics and gaming journals were corrupt, what kind of behavior might you expect to see?
Well, first you would expect a creative solution. Like something to actually SOLVE the problem, not just whine about it. And I think it is safe to say that the moment your movement is more about 'catalogging' all the grievances against you than actually solving the problem, its a pretty good indicator that you aren't interested in the ethics of anything.
So many of these people claim to be 'liberal' or 'progressive' or 'I'm a libertarian' but they all ACT conservative, both embracing racist and sexist humor, dancing with delight at anything that goes against 'Social Justice Warriors' or really anything that is remotely progressive.
They are, in short a socially conservative movement made up of grognards who do not like the fact that the world has Moved On, in the truest sense of the Gunslinger books by Steven King. These knuckle dragging regressive trolls are slathering in their own juices.
But why should I care? I don't. Not really. But I hate liars. I really do and while I don't claim perfection, Breitbart.com is and has been a particularly hated bit of conservative trash for quite some time because of the Acorn buillshit they got away with and were never criminally prosecuted for. FRAUD is profiting by lying and it is now proven in courts of law that they lied and yet no one has prosecuted any of them except the pimpin pimp liars. Meanwhile Gamergate tries and tries to deny its links to these assholes.
So do I enjoy mocking these turds? You bet.
What does this have to do with writing? Well, I've put them in the Book of Heliotropic fairy tales but honestly I think an entire anthology of Gamergate slashfic would be hilarious. Gamergaters writing angry slashfic against folks only to fall victim (in fiction) of their darkest most intolerant little dark desires.
I'll keep you posted :D
Friday, August 12, 2016
Future Plans
This year I am writing my 7th novel "Fruitloop and Frankenstein" during nanowrmo....which is significant because after that I've completed my life goal to write seven....At this point the 2nd half/2nd novel in the Forever West series is kind of needed given the 15% I just chopped off to make it interesting and Heliotrope really feels like it needs three novels and several stories to make it work.
And I really REALLY want to write something after visiting Finland w Julia but still...
I think "retirement" for me as a writer is in the future. There is a lot to do and a short time to do it. Sure, success could happen and I'll never ENTIRELY stop writing but retiring what I call 'the 2nd life' ...definitely see that happening soon. Maybe by the end of next year if not this one.
Wednesday, August 10, 2016
[Heliotrope] Frankensteins of Frankenstein
The single biggest argument in this involves the Frankensteins made by Frankenstein. Yes, it is both a noun and a verb. I Frankenstein. We Frankenstein. You Frankenstein. We all Frankenstein. We shall be Frankensteining. We shall Frankenstein. Thou shalt not Frankenstein etc.
At any rate, you would think that Frankenstein would be upset at the idea of Frankensteining, and Frankly, you would be right, but loneliness does things to a man, and as time wears on, you desire immortal companions. But it isn't just that. Frankenstein was always obsessed with out Frankensteining his father (Frankenstein.) He could do a better job.
So Frankenstein went out and got himself another Frankenstein. No one is entirely sure where Frankenstein the III came from. When he has been spotted, he has been reluctant to say, but what is known is that Frankenstein (Jr) did indeed do a good job. Frankenstein the III was considerably better adjusted person than Jr. III wasn't afraid of fire, small children or bad jokes. Curiously, Frankensteinologists have always noted that he was in fact afraid of Windmills and outrageous french accents, but the origins of this has been lost in the mists of time.
Tuesday, August 2, 2016
[Poem] Good King Yurtle Ruled His Sandbox
Humans is Humans
And that's a fact.
Nothing wrong with it.
Oh what a magnificent creature is man
Yada. Etc. Etc. Etc.
And with humans comes the dark side
Gossip
Jealousy
In Fighting
We have a choice
In This Short Life of Ours
To Rise Above
Or Sink Below
But if you Rise
Rise for Real
Don't go through the motions
Like Good King Yurtle
Slow and Ponderous
Was his Mein
Universal Fairness
Did he obtain
One law for all
In his tiny sandbox
Turtle droppings aside
But the King played favorites
Oh yes he did
All for the guy
Who his zipper undid
And ole king Yurtle
Did Snap and Command
And many a friendship
Did his fury disband
Left and Right
His Banning Chop
Slashed hapless users
From his sandbox slop
But in the end
Even Yurtle did bow
To the disgusting turdness
Of his favorite sow
And so did turdlet
Go by and by
And offer Yurtle
a chance at the High
Ethics could rule
And justice could matter
But Yurtle ignored it
Watch his dignity splatter
No honor
No truth
Just an angry scowl
Yurtle the Turtle
Did sputter and howl
For Yurtle's sandbox
It leaked like a siv
Beware Mr. Fair King
Lest he give you the Shiv.
Friday, July 29, 2016
[Poem] It's Official, I'm Fictional
I'm not just from a fictional reality
I'm for practical purposes as a writer
Fictional
Worn bundles of words
Stacking up like cardboard corpes
Piled all around me
Not the bottom of my heart
But proof that the same number of robots
Viewed my test
As view the call for Rhombus's facebook page
In other words
No one reads this
A tumbleweed in the literary world
So while nominally an extrovert
I've finally found my introvert
At this point
There is no reason to scribe
Even for my poetry
Except that which I choose to
This is for me
And me alone
Thus gentle reader
My reader is myself
And I can live with that
I wish you well
We are only just beginning.
Thursday, July 28, 2016
A poor shadow of a facebook page
Here is my new facebook page. Sadly it is only an author page.
https://www.facebook.com/rhombusticks2/
Second post to distinguish humans from robots, please dont click
I suppose that's more than 0.....
Tuesday, July 26, 2016
If human, please don't click. I wanna see how many robots I have.
Friday, July 22, 2016
Monday, July 18, 2016
Losing my Facebook Account
So I'm moving back to New Orleans, at least for a while. The Everglades are just not the same quality of swap as Lousisiana. I return to my old shack only to find it condemned. No big deal to me. I just tear off the boards but suddenly realize that this is not so easy as just returning home.
I don't have a job here any more. My occasional busking or sheer luck or ability to see supernatural creatures has made me enough money to survive in Miami, but there is nothing here. And I can hear the shelling in the distance. The war has started all over again, shortest peace in North American history. And I don't want anything to do with it.
I briefly wonder if I should learn what EP has about how to physically travel between worlds, but decide against it. It seems to come at a terrible price, even if I am unsure what that might be. I briefly consider some of my contacts and astrally project on the Bridge to Everywhere and ask them if they have any local contacts.
I find a Talking Harp (not a singing, don't ever ask her to sing) who knows a local Nephilim who is looking for a pizza delivery driver for some SELECT clientelle and it pays pretty well. It's not perfect, but it will keep the kerosine lamps on. A job is a job is a job.
Sunday, July 10, 2016
Well that's not good
Friday, July 8, 2016
[Naked City] Not of but in
Here we all are
The potato madman
Gurgling on his political rage
The lackadaisical Carlos an
Listless in emptied from Facebook
Soon to return with a fury
The broken soiled
And the twice under bussed
And me of course
Myself and myself and myself
And that's just beneath the glass mask
The Names of Terminus
The Queen of a Thousand Wigs
The Shaman of Slapstick
The Keeper of Time
The Newsman
The marine
The Artist that Could
The boy who can't say no
And even the psychic sidekick
And so many are new
So very new
The wheel sits there
Pilt Cousin to Mr Time you
Shame and fun
Dealt 8 different wheelers
Crowded and classy
But a cash only bar
Fixed up the goat farm
It's all come quite far
Why I am I not reading?
Because I am Naked City
And Naked City is me
I am all sovereign city
The city is dead
Let the games begin
Long live the city.
[Writer Stuff] I suck
A small handful tell me I am good. Though my raw writing is regarded with the praise of raw sewage. Indeed, in some cases, they might want to swim in raw sewage rather than read my writing.
I am someone who draws their creative energy from others and from joy. An extrovert and someone who is inspired when happy is a terrible combination for either prolificness or quality of writing. I've had a lot of abuse heaped on me which lends some gravitas to my work sometimes, and the weirdness that makes it unique is also fun.
But I appreciate my artistic friends to kind to say I suck but who nevertheless recognize my need to express myself creatively just like anyone else; because it is a need. I might suck, but you know what sucks more?
Being a Muggle.
I've seen what happens when someone lets their creativity die. They become not just a Muggle but Small. And I am many things, but I will never be Small.
But there is little joy in my life at the moment and I am feeling rather existentially lonely.
The writing will return in time.
The script can die in a fire though.
Saturday, July 2, 2016
Wednesday, June 29, 2016
[Poem] The Man in the Glass Mask
There is therein the words do lie
Of conscience streaming in the wick
The locks we guard our hearts with
Masked shadows flames tongue lick
One place we find refuge is the place of great effervescence
Where the well runs deep
and we refine it in quicksilver steel
Mirrors run cool that tells therein there are
We learn to wield the blade of sapience precisions
The light of a thousands suns behind the visor
The authentic bucket of well water made still
And poured upon the reach of our expectations glass
So much word salad tossed until Caesar is rendered unto Caesar
And Christ as And On Toast whispers amenities of the soul
In the sense that you practically haven't got one
But do when you where your heart on your sleeve
But show now not thy scars young buck
For the ides of march will stab at thee
This then the mask of glaziered ice does burn close to the skins touch
Advice heeded is wisdoms watch word.
Know silence's queue when it comes.
Tuesday, June 28, 2016
[Script] The Trial of Captain America - Page 3
Nick Spencer: So...what are we looking at again?
Sosori: For light's sake, this is the THIRD time I have explained it to you.
Nick Spencer: Humor me.
Sosori: I'm not particularly inclined to. You tell me.
Nick Spencer: What if I don't want to?
Sosori: Not my problem.
Nick Spencer: Aren't you supposed to be my defense attorney?
Sosori: Something like that.
Nick Spencer: So isn't it like...your job to explain things to me?
Sosori: No. I don't actually get paid to help you, its more of a calling.
Nick Spencer: Wait, what? So what makes sure you are working in my interest?
Sosori: Why, nothing Mr Spencer.
Nick Spencer: Then why the hell should I trust you?
Sosori: I never said you should.
Sunday, June 26, 2016
Saturday, June 25, 2016
Friday, June 24, 2016
[Writer Stuff] How to Find Where to Sell Your Stuff
The first thing that I would recommend for anyone writing in such a genre would be to check Science Fiction Writer's association. Now its true in a workshop, their 'expert' writers treated me like shit, but they do a lot of good including ensure that the prices and pay for a number of venues stays relatively high. You just need to be able to write a novel or three short stories, which is easier than it sounds but you can do it if you have the talent or the tenacity. I have little talent beyond raw creativity; and as I explained last week, that does little good by itself.
But I also have tenacity.
You can just google writing venues or also check out (or buy) a recent copy of writer's digest. All fine things. What I can tell you is that especially with short stories, if they don't take electronic submissions, they probably arent worth submitting to. Why pay postage to be able to just get a form letter as rejection? In the old days, of course, this was not an option, but this is 2016, and if they arent with the program, find somewhere else for your stuff.
Two other options are contests and anthologies. There are number of sites that collect lists of these; but if you are considering which ones you can trust, I would go with someone who has done it before.
Thursday, June 23, 2016
[Script] The Trial of Captain America - Page 2
Steve: I would never be a nazi.
Sosori: I don't disagree with you, but a Nazi is a nazi is a Nazi.
Steve: My whole life was told by someone else....
Sosori: Does it feel that way from your perspective?
Steve: No. My life didn't seem fictional from my perspective.
Sosori: We have been resurrecting so called 'real people' for a few centuries, we know how to get it right.
Steve: I don't remember being a nazi. I certain didn't choose to be one.
Sosori: That is good. The formula we use for resurrecting a fictional character is new. It is something that involves them putting together the bulk of the stories and letting the world and the nacent AI figure out for themselves what is true and what is not. Every time it is generated, it is different. There may be many Steve Rogers, but ultimately because of the evil done in the name of Captain America the Nazi, we started with figures who could be tried instead of...real symbols. That's been done. And it has been enough of an emberassment that they do not want to repeat the experience.
Wednesday, June 22, 2016
[Heliotrope] Of Course Mad Jack Churchill was a Slayer of Darkness
There are some things that go without saying.
When a tall gaunt stranger comes into town and buys up the entire garlic supply as well as all the silver weapons they can find, OF COURSE he's a vampire.
When large amounts of children go vanishing only to be replaced by adult strangers who say they were abducted OF COURSE you are dealing with an infiltration from Middle Fairy....
And when the clay more wielding bow hunting bad ass goes around hunting Nazis, OF COURSE he's not just hunting Nazis but is in fact fighting evil Thule Society members and things that threaten us all from beyond that CANNOT BE KILLED by guns.
Obviously.
In Earth, evidence of the supernatural is well hidden with blurry photographs and tall tales, but on Terra there is no such quandry. The supernatural is well documented in Terra for anyone that wants to actually bother to look or show up at their local occult bookstore. Every mall of considerable size has an occult book store and regular book store at the same time. It's one of the things that makes Terra that much better than Earth.
Do you think Sir Terry Pratchet was the first English knight to force a weapon from meteoric iron?
OF COURSE NOT. Duh.
Thousands of evil arcane nazis and their supernatural foes were killed by this actual historical badass.
Tuesday, June 21, 2016
[Script] The Trial of Captain America - Page 1
Cast of Characters
Captain America: A fictional character created as an AI who can realize that he is a fictional character but still recall his entire existence as if he were a real person. Not a Nazi.
Nick Spencer: Artist of questionable taste who somehow got the job as writer for Captain America. Nazi Status...Unknown.
Sosori: A crappy defense attorney who also represented Mr Hamburger in the podcast piece, Mr Hamburger. Not a Nazi.
Angry Cow: A very good prosecuting attorny who wants to prove Captain America is a Nazi. Also appears in Mr Hamburger. Not a Nazi.
Hitler: Author of Mein Kampf, Convicted Murderer of millions. Talk Show Host. Definitely a Nazi.
Judge: An AI of infinite and intelligence or wisdom. Not a Nazi.
Monday, June 20, 2016
Should Artists who defend Nick Spencer Lose Credibility? Yes. Absolutely.
The thing is, because real art is about the exploration of the soul, being contrarian or against the grain is the place where you will find great art. Pushing the envelope is as natural to them as breathing, but that also means that there is a certain predictability in counter culture which is that which mainstream culture is NOT.
Thus, if mainstream culture starts to find interest and value in the patriotism of an American Icon, it is the natural temptation of artistic culture to challenge that and find new ways of looking at things. This experiment often pays off; Wicked spawned a whole sub genre of films and stories about the antagonist as protagonist. In an age of white washing and culture wars, this makes sense. And Marvel has done an excellent job of turning many of these characters on their head, changing gender or race or even sexual orientation.
Marvel replaced Steve Rogers with someone who was Black (Falcon) and had a strong story run.
But Nick Spencer wanted to go further. Nick Spencer, failed politician, and self proclaimed feminist because he had a story whose primary characters were women, suddenly feels that he has the chops to mess around with one of the seven or eight great icons of comics. Sometimes this pays off; sometimes this is great story.
And the artists rushing to Nick's defense are shouting at the need to give him breathing room to do so. But have you looked at Nick's bibliography? Nick is no Grant Morrison...Nick isn't Alan Moore. Nick has done a lot of minor works and had short stints at some major ones. No one at Marvel challenged him on this, but then; shouldn't we ask why?
In interviews with Nick, Nick himself has says that he is surprised that he didn't get more push back on this change but Marvel just let him do it. Why doesn't that bother people? This isn't a story of Nick wanting to tell a powerful story and overcoming the odds to do it; its a publicity stunt and a way to kick against the foundation of an iconic image as 'a way to protest trump.' So...why didn't he do a comic about Teddy Roosevelt and George Washington secretly being Nazis too?
People say that this is a gimmick; and that this too shall pass. Will it? Given the inordinant amount of artists defending Nick, one must ask how much thought THEY have put into this? It seems a knee jerk response against the rabid #gamergate fanboys with no thought about what this looks like being announced the day after #SteveNeedsaboyfriend or the fact that he was originally created by jewish creators.
Make no mistake about it. Nick knew exactly what he was doing. Mealy mouthed excuses about "Hydra being more about Spectre than Nazis" means you don't understand Hydra OR Spectre. So when an artist goes defending Nick's decision to do this, I must lose respect for them. It's their choice and their creative currency, but when one artist disrespects the work of another SO MUCH without ANY visible thought to the material, I must simply shake my head and walk away.
Sunday, June 19, 2016
Saturday, June 18, 2016
What's in a Word?
I dont consider it Applied Mythology, which is a very specific methodology of immersion in the power of stories to find meaning in our lives at an individual and then a community level. I DO think that applied mythology is a valuable tool to make that happen.
I definitely don't think it is sociology, any more than chemistry is what the guys at dupont use to make their products. What? You might say, of course they use chemistry. There is a difference between the science of chemistry and chemical engineering; which involves applying that chemistry to an actual solution as well as designing the solution. Sociology is definitely a component of this and I need to learn a lot more about it.
There is the popular term that occurred in Iraq and Afghanistan called "Nation Building" and I think in practical terms, that might be a good working title for people who don't understand or wont understand the fancy words I will be throwing around; but there are two problems with this. The first one, is that the word now carries baggage; we tried it and failed. But the second is because the PRIMARY method of 'nation building' in this case was because it was a government trying to build another government. Progressives do not rely on government to always be the solution but a government definitely will. Everything is a nail that their hammer can solve; though rarely and to sometimes good effect with training an agency can see the value of trying a different solution. But then corruption just comes in and makes it worthless.
No, what I want to do is more than governments. Nation building works, but even then, some institutions should be global. Community Building has a nice ring to it, but that sounds a lot more like Community Organizing, and we're not just talking politics here but a holistic practical application of multiple institutions working together, how those institutions come together and how they interact.
I need to end for now, but I think Community Building is as good a word as I've found until I find something better.
Friday, June 17, 2016
[Writer Stuff] Ideas
There are some ideas that have been done a million times, but if done in a skillful enough window can make things truly interesting. The story is the things that matters, not the idea behind the story. Still, the thing is, sometimes an idea can be good, but it is never enough to sell it by itself. No one ever fell in love with an idea in a book or a movie or a game, not even utopia, and what idea could be better than that?
But new and interesting ideas can make the difference between a good author and a great one. So knowing how to generate them is a good thing. Knowing how to make good ideas happen is an art; not a science, but there are several things you can do to increase your base creativity. Do things in new and different ways; collaborate with creative people, or take two totally different ideas and try to make them work together. There are a million books and a million lists, but the most important one of all is this.
You have to be willing to fail. Take bold new leaps. Try new things because if you are not you will never get anywhere.
Thursday, June 16, 2016
[Script] Peter Pan vs Frankenstein vs Superman - Page 13
Just as Frankenstein is about to cross, Peter flies across on his bike and the crowd is shocked.
Dr Frankenstein: You cheater! Get him Frankenstein!
Frankstein grunts and advances on Peter who laughs. Twinkerbell hovers over Frankenstein to deliver some dust, but Frankstein leaps up and claps his hands, flattening Twinkerbell like a mosquito who floats off into the wind.
Peter looks horrified and swoops down to grab Denny.
Denny: Hey!
A blur in the distance flies in. Peter turns around and is punched in the face.
Supergirl: Leave my girlfriend alone creep!
Peter looks shocked.
Peter: Wha-WHAT?
Supergirl: You heard what I said.
Denny and Supergirl kiss.
Peter is shocked. Both of them punch Peter in the face who falls to the water.
They smile and fly off into the sunset holding hands.
Wednesday, June 15, 2016
[Heliotrope] It's Always Midnight Somewhere
That's because there are an awful lot of Fae in Savannah. It's a summer solstice must for anyone who still has access to Terra from Outer or Middle Fae. (Inner Fae celebrates Summer Solstice in a much different fashion....) So there are naturally a lot of Southerners in this area that have Fae blood. Some of them are noble Sidhe. Some of them are from various royal bloodlines, though inbreeding tends to lead to various conditions such as mental retardation or a pronounced ego. Not all of them are like this, but the less 'in the know' of who they are, the more likely they are to have a tainted bloodline. No one wants people with a literal Stick Up Their Ass to show up at the solstice celebrations.
The city has a lovely architecture and view, and the otherworldly influence can keenly be felt. Most any knicknack picked up in the city, and especially the ancient river front is likely to have a small bit of enchantment to it. The exception to this is the obvious store for Psychics, which do have enchantments but only the astral equivalent of "Kick Me" signs for anyone who can see such things. A significant chunk of Fae do love their pranks.
This area of the south does have their well known Trolls of course. They have claims of some level of artistic ability, which is oddly strange compared to the large number of humans around them that actually do. In recent years, Petunia and Grandfather Fiddleback had increased vigilance here of renegades to Outer Fae (they don't dare mess around with Middle Fae of course), so a large number of these trolls have scampered to Atlanta.
Tuesday, June 14, 2016
[Script] Peter Pan vs Frankenstein vs Superman - Page 12
Peter: Look Twink! The finishing line! I can see it!
Twinkerbell chimes encouragingly.
Scene: There is a blur of light. Suddenly the city swallows and blurs around peter as he is actually moved faster than the speed of light back to his original starting point.
Peter: Wha...we're right back where we started?!
Superman: That's right. Cheating is not allowed.
Peter (turns around): That's not fair!
Superman: Neither is cheating.
(Peter whines and emo hits Superman. He hurts his hand.)
Superman: Now, let's both start again and try to catch up to Frankenstein.
Peter: Get him Twink!
Twinkerbell hovers over superman, sprinkling Pixie dust on him.
(Superman crosses his arms and shakes his head, smirking. Peter does the same. Superman looks confused for a moment, and then begins to float up off the ground.)
Peter: Magic. Bye superman.
Superman: I can fly on my own damn it, I....come back here!
(Superman begins to try and 'swim' through the air, back to his back but continues to float upward like a balloon. Peter flies off on his bike.)
Monday, June 13, 2016
The National FlintLock Act
Whereas, feeling the need to maintain an originalist interpretation of the Constitution, we the congress of the United States of America, do solemnly declare that it is the Law of the Land that no weapon whose design was patented (ref WIPO standards per law 457-A) post 1789 may be in the hands of a private citizen. Recognizing that the right to bear arms shall not be abridged, and therefore added on to in any capacity, citizens may not possess a firearm of any kind whose design did not exist prior to 1789.
A) Military weaponry pre 1789 including Canons, Ballistic, Trebuchets, Mortars and Artillery are exempt from this law since there is no indication that these were intended by the founding fathers for the 2nd amendment intention of Self Defense.
b) Regulated Private Militias, licensed by their individual state (Ref Amendment 14 allowing Federal Regulation of the Right to Life) including Private Security Companies, Private Detective Agencies, Gun Clubs or Civil War (1,2, or 3) reenactors may have weapons designed up to 1879 (ref Texas Admittance to the Union Act of 1912).
c) National Guard Units of States subject to the Voting Rights Act of 1965 specifically at this time Alabama, Oklahoma, Georgia, South Carolina, North Carolina, Texas (As Regulated Territory or State), Virginia, West Virginia, West Carolina, Mississippi and Kansas shall be subject to regulation of this statute and may not have weaponry designed after 1918.
Clauses of this act shall be enforceable by the Federal Beurea of Investigation under the supervision of the President of the United States.
If any clause of this act is found to be unconstitutional, then the size of the court shall immediately be expanded to twice its size with candidates preselected and nominated per the Bull Moose Majority Act of 2017.
Challenging this act in court shall constitute a felony upon failure to overturn."
Sunday, June 12, 2016
I Give Up Trying To Make Sense of this Shit
Every day
I gaze out into my electric Palantir
Trying to make sense of the two worlds
And all I see are trends and chess games of petty kings
That still cant prepare you for the noxious bullshit
Some good God Guy with a gun goes and pulls
To pull this on a bunch of people
Just trying to find a bit of joy in this miserable life of ours
I have sought knowledge
Because I thought knowledge would bring me power
But there is no power
I never really believed I had control
But I figured I might be able to release some balast
And control how high I was when the wind blows
What a joke.
What a joke it is to think we have any ability to affect
The living dicks that surround us
Or even the other people that cozy up to the living dicks
As if somehow these men who arent men
Who are ammosexualized shriveled souled ghouls
Were worth knowing
You know its part of their heritage
To be fucking monsters
But I cant even be angry at the fucktards any more
They're like sandcastles
Just fucking fiddly bits of rocks
Moved around at the next tide of filth spewed out on "our" airwaves
By the monsterous webs of vomitous billionares
All I can do is have a beer and stay away from the fuckers
While I can
And stay away from the fuckers who think they're swell
While I can
And tomorrow is another day
And lets hope that those of use who are not fucking monsters
Get another and maybe even another
Saturday, June 11, 2016
The Power of Words
But in biology, there are disciplines beyond even that, climatologists and wildlife management and even urban biologists....
I think we can get to the micro level and try to engineer institutions, we need an understanding of how institutions work with each other, what keeps them together and how many you need for a stable society. Case in point, we created a government in Iraq and Afghanistan...and it didn't work out too well. Ignoring the standard libertarian bullshit, it was more than just because we had a tin ear during the process. It was because we imposed our idea of what a government should be in an environment where people already had preconceived ideas. That is terrible engineering and Feng Shui in general.
We have all of this knowledge about how the mind works and how people work even at a macro level but we choose to ignore how it all fits together. We only cared about putting a government together, but not about the other things that make a democratic society work, like credible parties (yes I said credible parties, because it isn't like our own democracy is working now is it?) or those little old ladies that volunteer at the election areas or the honest brokers in the areas of America that are actually honest. But that's just politics. A chamber of commerce of small business owners to make sure government responds to business and people and cosponsor infrastructure projects that helps the people at large. Charitable foundations from guilty dead rich people who help fund the arts and cement areas that the government hasn't noticed.
But that's all complicated, you say. Well, maybe. But National Park managers don't just focus on the animal that people care about (say bears) but all the things that it eats, that eat it, or that eat the things that eat the things that eat the things. If we can do it for a fucking national park, why the hell can't we do it for societies and government?
We are not only really not trying, but we're not studying it in a systemic way. There are no competing theories about how to do it, much less actual study. Oh, sure, these guys have created a whole bunch of institutions to shape society...
One of the chapters focuses on how an airline tried to get its pilots to reduce error and faced little success until one guy was smart enough to figure out the problem was that in Korean, the language is very hierarchical, so the pilot and the copilot did not cooperate. The copilot would never correct or inform the pilot of anything. So they switched to English...suddenly pilot and copilot were much more egalitarian and the accident rate plummited.
So I think that forming a culture matters about the language that is spoken, at the least words that are chosen (ie never using lying conservative words) or the language itself. Latin used to be the lingua franca of the intellectual elite. Maybe we need to start teaching that again. But better...
Esperanto was designed at the beginning of the 20th century as an easy to use language that encouraged openness, peace and understanding. Maybe we should use it as the language of government.
Yes, in the novel 1984 they chance the language to that of compliance.
Its not like Fox News hasn't already done that. Vocabulary usage among conservatives is considerably different. But is communication with those who have no desire to communicate but only infect really worth your time? Can you have a rational discourse with an emotional being?
I'm not trying to convince you to push a rock up hill or not push a rock up a hill.
What I AM saying is that to solve this problem in the long term, we need to look at society, what makes it work, and how to build and maintain it and I think cultural memetics...or whatever the hell you call it..is the way to go.
Soon I might explore the right words. Or not, but eventually. What it is, and what it is not. But I think the language, and chosing the right language for each institution might be one mechanism for doing that.
Tuesday, June 7, 2016
[ heliotrope] smarter than the average Magic Bag bear
You have a curse. You just don't know it yet. One of the rare inhabitants of outer fairy, the magic bear or more specifically the subspecies known as the magic bad bear, is a mysterious creature indeed rather than sneaking about stealing picnic baskets comma it creates magical picnic baskets. It is a little-known fact, that bears free date humans. I had actually tried to say came before humans using the prefix free for free or 3 Aur Pyaar well this thing is really messed up but I kind of like the idea of dating humans so I'm going to leave that in there. As I was saying comma magic back Bears known for creating picnic baskets that reduce all the things you could ever want or produce all the things you ever want but they can also reduce things as you put them into the picnic basket so small that it feels as if they were actually there so you can take them out put them in there. Uline
I find it rather interesting that the word new line which is this case is used to an incident initiate a return is also very close to the word or sign which has no relevance to what we're talking about but there's no humans I think it's relevant to my amusement. By the way they can city is losing burning Bernie, Wichita which sucks but it is keeping Gina butt it is keeping Gina... kama which docs which sucks what it is keeping Gina bought it is keeping Sheena... So I will still be continuing my monthly contributions in case someone decides to let me ask early projected side Jesus Christ I didn't even say any of those things they went totally mental it went totally mental Jesus Christ now I know why people in a mile has sworn off using robots that's easy the letter A the letter P the letter P the letter L the letter A the letter in the letter G the letter A the letter R the letter M the letter A the letter y the letter A the letter R good God just Jesus Christ what the fuck is wrong with this I'm trying write a simple piece about Magic Bag Bears will really magic bears but I decided to find out that yes there are apparently Magic Bag bears and this stupid piece of shit just keep scrolling crap all over my God damn well it's like anyway.. nearby
Solar Bears new facility beastiality had to say that twice reality beastiality Valatie beastiality it really doesn't want to say that probably because it doesn't have a way Wayne Wang you know penis anyway speaking of which apparently Magic Bag Bears use it Jesus Christ what kind of woman would sleep with a Magic Bag bear... Probably a little horny and hungry one in fact I would not at all be surprised if I'd Investigation Discovery that male bestiality with female bear's was far more common the male bestiality with female humans although saying it out loud like that makes me sound like a sexist brick to the truth is probably all humans are interested in fucking Bears but that also sounds stupid when I say it out loud so I think I'm just going to quit while I'm ahead magic bags
[Script] Peter Pan vs Frankenstein vs Superman - Page 11
Girl: What happened to my Bike?
Scene: Girl begins to cry.
Scene: Superman begins is flying over terrain. Voice over of crying from the girl. He cringes. Then he steels his resolve and flies faster.
Scene: A pristine artic wasteland. A cute artic fox trundles across the snow.
Scene: A giant blur flies through the sky.
Scene: The fox is all fluffy and looks shocked.
Scene: Superman enters the FORTRESS OF SOLITUDE which looks like the Emerald City from the Wizard of Oz but with ice crystals instead of Emerald.
Superman: Father?
Scene: Jor-El appears as a hologram.
Jor El: Yes my son?
Superman: I need a bike that won't break
Jor El: Why?
Superman: For Justice.
Jor El: (beat) Oh. OK. Well, there is this chamber that harnesses the red rays of -
Superman: No! I'm not doing that again. Something else.
Jor El: (beat): Well...we could make a super bike.
Superman: Yes! Let us use advanced Kryptonian materials and science to make a completely honest bike that will not break with my super powers but is not actually powered by anything but myself!
Monday, June 6, 2016
[Naked City] Eternity - We have not always been here[
by Emmit Other
There has always been a here
Though we have not always been in it
But the difference between the then
And the now
Those are things that pass so many generations
Since we began tracking the stars that shine on clear nights
That it seems like
We no not have numbers for how long it has been
Only that it has been many hundred hundred
It might even be hundreds of hundreds of hundreds
The stars have changed
This is the eternity
And we sing our songs of the deep
And we swim
Our blood warm against the tide
We are not that which we eat
We laugh
And share songs with the Ancient ones
And then you came
We find you hilarious
Moving hither and yon in your little rafts
At least we did
Sure you killed some of us
But we knew you were stupid
So we helped you anyway
When you were drowning
When you were dying
Against the sharks
Against the sea
But the wood became larger and larger
In the blink of an eye they were metal
And then the noise
The horrorific noise
It wouldn't stop
Soon the ancient ones began killing themselves
Just to escape it
The toxic acid was bad enough
But the noise never stops
It will never stop
Until you are gone
We are eternal
And we are pretty sure you are not
And we find that sadly
But joyously
Hillarious
Saturday, June 4, 2016
[Theme] On the Building of Culture
And I don't want to write about politics on my writing blog, but a few events have come together recently that I thought were worthy of consideration.
The first was that we are watching the show Connections (my wife and I), which looks at Change from a different point of view.
The second was a conversation I recently had with my friend Wayne, who has pointed out that China has been exploring how to have a stable society that isn't a democracy. Note: I believe in Democracy and think it is a good idea
But this morning I couldn't help but think of this quote
Third - this quote
And then I remembered this seminal work by Thomas Piketty.
Thumb Nail version? The more stable a society is, the stratification takes place. This is simply a matter of mathematics. WWI and WWII shook things up, but if we have WWIII there might not be any more society to have...which creates stability, which creates stratification.
Fourth and final, I remembered this - The United States is an Oligarchy. That isn't really news. It's scientifically proven. Furthermore, the math of our constitution favors a two party system. This is nothing new, people have been aware of it for a long time.
What I want to explore is that Democracy is the best form of government, but for WHO? Well ok so we want "democratic socialism" but HOW? And even if we got it, could we keep it?
These questions are not new. You know that. But they're actually VERY old.
Remember this guy?
Plato talks about the inherit instability of democracies or Republics in the Republic. He knew it, but Piketty has gone and mathematically gone and proved it.
So say you GET Democratic Socialism? Say you GET a post scarcitity utopia...how do you KEEP it?
You can tinker with different ideas, but how can you be SURE?
We need a scientific answer. We need a means and a discipline to be able to shape and create cultures. We need Cultural Engineering.
This idea is also not knew. I'm not proposing anything others having thought of.
Propaganda isn't new. Once Psychology existed, people wanted to exploit it for the purpose of influencing the masses.
And boy can they.
Knowing HOW to manipulate the masses isn't really a question. And we will keep coming up with ways to do it.
The missing equation isn't the HOW, it's the WHAT.
What the hell are you going to build? WHAT do you build to keep a society from going off the rails. Even this question isn't new.
Progressives at the turn of the 20th century thought that government was the answer.
You could build it better, stronger faster, and government could be the solution. Often, it can. And something is better than nothing which is why government can work, but sometimes a government solution can be a bit of a hammer looking for a nail.
The counter argument was of course...
I'm not even going to talk about that argument. Read the book if you like....
But as my friend Wayne also pointed out...that argument pretends that the Tragedy of the Commons is a Myth.
TLDR version?
Moving on.
I had long thought the solution lied in perhaps non government institutions, like the Red Cross. And I will be exploring that in part, but its more than that. We need something else.
Again, I'm not the only person asking this question.
1) One of the most rewarding experiences of my life was working with the Mythic Imagination Institute.
And for anyone exploring this question I cannot recommend reading their journal enough. But for the purposes of what I'm seeking here, I'm not using the word they came up with "Applied Mythology" because that has some very specific ideas. It basically involves using the Power of Myth to use meta story telling techniques to grant meaning and power to your life and to your community at large.
I do believe that many of the answers they found there apply to what I'm looking to do here. But I don't think it has all the answers; and more importantly, they have their way of doing things that others are not going to want to use, both because they have a misunderstanding of the use of the term mythology and also because.....other reasons I might go into at some point.
But its powerful stuff, and I recommend learning about them and investigating them. What's still there anyway.
2) Governments have been looking to do this for quite a while. While doing research as Project Manager for Mythic, I found an interesting article which basically indicated that at one point DARPA was looking into story telling as a tool. I've since had a hell of a time finding it.
I wonder if someone found it and made it disappear...
Maybe. Or maybe it just is too obscure to remember.
Dunno.
Governments want to prune society like Bansai trees. It helps keep things stable.
So knowing how to keep populations passive might work for governments....but does that help society?
Who should benefit in society? That's a philosophical question at the best of times, but in the question of this case, its very relevant, because a scientific or academic discipline that focuses on shaping culture should ideally have a philosophy behind it. After all, one can have medical knowledge but to be a Doctor, as we understand it, one should understand the ethics that have been built up around the philosophy of First, Do No Harm.
This is powerful knowledge, and like bioethics and genetics it should have an understanding of who it is meant to serve. Not the few, not the powerful, not any race creed religion or color but the idea of building societies and cultures by DESIGN rather than happenstance for the populace at large.
I will be writing Saturdays, but not every Saturday, exploring just that. If I ever resurrect the podcast, I'll move this to Sundays. I argue it is relevant to my writing blog because a) Writing Non Fiction is still writing and b) An understanding of what makes people tick and why they do is something every writer should know, because this relates directly to that message within the message that every writer looks for...Theme.
I'll do what to CALL it in the next entry.
Friday, June 3, 2016
[Writer Stuff] Dust
I have long maintained that we are in a race against a ticking clock when it comes to technology, because there are some technologies, that once placed in the hands of a dictator will be the end of us. The first one of those is Nanotechnology, the second is a mind machine interface and the third is teleportation. Yes, technically we could add time travel to that, but I'm not sure we will ever discover that. The other possibility in things is an AI of true post human intelligence which, if benevolent could cause utopia or if malevolent could end things ala Ecliipse Phase.
Eclipse Phase is probably the best rp about post humanity that I have ever seen besides Transhuman space. But Eclipse Phase does a better job of showing what a super AI would be like and how much damage it would do.
What does this have to do with the Silo series? On the surface, nothing, but both ask questions that Mary Shelley has been asking since she penned Frankenstein so long ago.
There are some technologies that are so dangerous, that we have science fiction for a reason. But even sometimes the prophetic stories are highly dangerous. For example consider one of the great staples of science fiction, the three laws of robotics.
Conversely, if the wrong kind of people (ie conservatives) discover nanotechnology first, they could easily release vast clouds of dust that will simply deconstruct us and of those that they spared make them slaves. Its one of the reasons that I like these things. While, I have great hope for technology, and we might actually have the utopic singularity, there are some things that we can have, but there are serious questions we aren't asking.
Anyway.
For those more interested in the subject, here are a few more resources about why the 3 laws are a serious fucking problem
Here and here and here.
Thursday, June 2, 2016
[Script] Peter Pan vs Frankenstein vs Superman - Page 10
Scene: Frankstein roars beneath him.
Frankenstein: Cheaaaaaaaaatrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Peter (Laughing): No one said anything in the rules about flying.
Frankenstein: (Roars): Cheaaterr! (goes around building.)
Peter (Laughs louder with Twinnkerbell): Hahahahahaha. Loser.
(Frankenstein roars and pedals right into one building and comes out the other side. He grins grimly and laughs at Peter. Peter and Twinkerbell look at each other. Peter gulps and pedals faster.)
Wednesday, June 1, 2016
[Heliotrope] The Green Stamp Man
One upon there was a mighty defender of the forest, the Green Man, who lived for thousands of years, challenging evil rulers from the Romans, to knights of Camelot to French nobility and even pretentious five year olds in WWI. But all things must come to an end, and at one point the copse of trees that he drew his power from was chopped down. These trees were made into pulp and eventually converted into paper for the miraculous program known as green stamps.
So the Green Man did what he had always done, defend the forest, though in this case the forest consisted of collectable prizes. So if you got the right prize, the Green Man would deliver it to you in person and make sure you got it, and that no one took it from you. The Dover Incdent of 1955, involved a pair of dogs that tried too keep Timmy (age 10) from getting the Radio that he had saved up for for the better part of 5 months. The dogs were unharmed but found in a yard of a kind old lady 500 miles north in Northern Scotland. No one had any explanation as to how they got there, but they were very reluctant to leave.
In another incident, a thief who stole 6000 green stamps from Little Old Miss Eyeonherfinger was found strung upside down in a series of vines outside the local constabulary station babbling about repentance and the need to be a better man. It is often thought that the Ghost of Christmas Present and the Green (Stamp) Man are similar mythological figures but while they are both fat, large, green and white, that is where the comparison ends.
Green stamps went out of style btu there are still enough of them around that the Green Stamp man is still bound to and draws from their power. According to rumor, he is shifting himself to a click per pay site on the interwebs. But he hasn't been able to constuct enough tubes yet.














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