Mr. Hamburger (2 of 3)

by T. C. Ricks

A man is transported to a future he does not understand for crimes he does not comprehend or believe he committed.  The future does not care.

Originally performed on the Smoke and Mirrors Podcast in 2012.

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Seventh Seal - Chapter 1 Page 6

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Row 1 Box 1 Jesra frowns and hits Pete in the arm.

Row 1 Box 2 Petes rubs his arm.

Pete: What was that for?

Row 1 Box 3 Jesra stands with her hands on her hips.

Jesra: That's for calling me a liar! Now I hit you and that's that.

Row 2 Box 1 Sluice and Vesuvius lay on the ground quite stunned.

Row 2 Box 2 Amanda moves over to Pete, unseen and whispers in his ear.

Row 2 Box 3 Pete leans forward, lips puckering.

Row 3 Box 1 Jesra blushes and smiles, leaning forward.

Row 3 Box 2 Pete's tongue comes out.

Row 3 Box 3 Jesra opens an eye to peek, hopeful.

Row 3 Box 4 Jesra looks shocked.

Seventh Seal - Chapter 1 - Page 5

Page 5

Row 1 – While the two of them pick themselves up off the ground in the center bottom of the panel, on the right of the panel Amanda spots Sluice and Vesuvius, and they spot her.

Row 2 - Panel 1 – Close up of Amanda's face, frowning.

Row 2 – Panel 2 – Sluice and Vesuvius looking very worried.

Row 2 – Panel 3 – Close up of Amanda's face smiling.

Row 2 – Panel 4 – Amanda reaches for a wand.

Row 3 – Wide shot. Amanda shoots a titanic bolt of magic at Sluice and Vesuvius.

Beneath the bolt, Pete and Jesra do not see Amanda.

Pete: I'm so sorry.

Jesra: Why are you apologizing? I hit you.

Pete: No! I hit you!

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Page 4

Row 1 Panel 1 – Jesra reaches up and steals a hot dog and runs off.

Row 1 Panel 2 – The man looks up, back at his hot dog stand and looks around for Jesra.

Row 1 Panel 3 – Amanda watches from across the street, an amused smile of approval on her face.

Row 1 Panel 4 – Amanda takes off up into the air.

Row 2 Panel 1 – Amanda flies across the street over the cars below. The hot dog vendor is confused in the background.

Row 2 Panel 2 – Amanda flies around the corner and lands next to Jesra, unseen.

Row 2 Panel 3 – Jesra continues to eat the hot dog. She eats it in two gulps, her mouth quite full.

Row 2 Panel 4 -

Jesra. Thought balloons. . o O “I need to get another doll.”

Row 3 Panel 1 – Pete comes running around the corner as fast as he can.

Row 3 Panel 2 – Sluice and Vesuvius are running right behind him.

Row 3 Panel 3 – Amanda pushes Jesra out into the open so that Pete will run into her.

Row 3 Panel 4 – Pete and Jesra collide. Pete's books scatter all around them.

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Mr. Hamburger (1 of 3)

by T. C. Ricks

A man is transported to a future he does not understand and put on trial for crimes he does not believe he committed...or comprehend.  The future does not care.

Originally performed on the Smoke and Mirrors sci fi podcast in 2012.

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Seventh Seal - Chapter 1 - Page 3

Page 3

Row 1 – Jesra sits, relaxing on a stoop, watching cars go by. She is obviously around 12.

Row 2 Panel 1 – Jesra sits up and spots something visible off panel.

Row 2 Panel 2 – Jesra in a thoughtful pose for a minute.

Row 2 Panel 3 – Jesra slides down the stairs of the stoop.

Row 2 Panel 4 – Jesra puts a small ratty looking doll down on the ground. It has some curious black marks about it.

Row 3 Panel 1 – Jesra strikes a match.

Row 3 Panel 2 – Jesra lights the doll on fire.

Row 3 Panel 3 – Jesra goes into ultra cute crying mode.

Jesra: Oh no! My dolly is on fire! Please someone help me!”

Row 3 Panel 4 – A man shows up, stomping the doll to try and put it out. Jesra is not in the panel.