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Row 1 The cop yells and dodges out of the way.

Row 2 Box 1 Vesuvius looks at Jesra.

Vesuvius: Why are the police after you?

Row 2 Box 2 Jesra looks embarrassed and looks up with her hand behind her head.

Row 2 Box 3 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.

Jesra: Well…I’m kind of a thief.

Row 2 Box 4 Vesuvius smiles but crosses his arms.

Vesuvius: Kind of?

Row 3 Box 1 The cop yells into the radio.

Row 3 Box 2 The operator looks concerned.

Row 3 Box 3 The operator talks into the radio.

Row 4 Panel broken up of several cops in subdivided panel receiving the message, looking concerned.

Radio Message: Known Suspect. Jesra Lopolis, On Strength Enhancing Drugs. Threw a Car at Responding Officer.

One of the Officers in the Panel: Car?!

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Row 1 Box 1 The group of heroes goes around a corner.

Row 1 Box 2 A policeman looks at them but only sees Pete and Jesra. Angle must be obvious enough to imply that the policeman can’t see Vesuvius or Sluice even though they are right in front of him.

Row 1 Box 3 Jesra spots the policeman and looks nervous.

Row 1 Box 4 The policeman looks at Jesra and begins to move towards them.

Row 2 Box 1 Jesra looks at Pete.

Jesra: Run!

Pete: Huh?!

Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius rolls his eyes.

Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks at Sluice, “We don’t have time for this. Can you take care of them?”

Row 2 Box 4 Sluice nods and starts to reach for a car.

Row 3 & Row 4 – Shown from policeman’s angle where it appears that Jesra is lifting the car because she hands in the air due to yelling at Pete. The car is upside down at an angle, held by Vesuvius, but also is an homage to the old Superman comic cover of issue 1. (If this is artistically impossible or ugly, just so an invisible car over Pete and Jesra’s head upside down heading toward the cop.)

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Row 1 A portal opens and Jesra, Pete, Sluice and Vesuvius walk through into a crowded area. No one seems to notice. Vesuvius is riding Jesra’s shoulder.

Row 2 Box 1 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.

Jesra: Are you sure that no one can see us?

Vesuvius: Yup.

Jesra: And they can’t see Pete or I either?

Vesuvius: Er…mabye.

Jesra: And it will wear off.

Vesuvius: Yup.

Jesra: So what do we do next?

Row 2 Box 2 Close up of Vesuvius looking sheepish.

Vesuvius: I don’t know. I mean….we need to find the third seal. But beyond what the little bright light says, this time I’m clueless. Sometimes we can learn little things that can help…but in this case…your guess is as good as mine.

Row 3 Box 1 Sluice growls and sits down in frustration on a nearby curve.

Vesuvius hops up on his shoulder.

Row 3 Box 2 Vesuvius pats Sluice’s neck.

Vesuvius: I understand big guy.

Amanda: Understand what?

Vesuvius: We’re not normally this in the dark. We normally have a lot of time to investigate this kind of thing, but now….

Amanda: You don’t know what to do.

Vesuvius: Yeah pretty much. For some reason we’re having problems finding the third seal.

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Row 1 Box 1 Slither whispers in Amanda’s ear again. Amanda looks curious.

Row 1 Box 2 Amanda looks up and then out through the window at Forsalio.

Amanda: Yes. You’re right. We can do some more things to distract him.

Row 1 Box 3 She looks over at a group of three scantily clad women.

Row 1 Box 4 Amanda gets a broad wicked grin.

Amanda: And I think I have just the thing in mind.

Row 2 Box 1 The scene shifts to Klerely who looks into a window at a music box forlornely.

Row 2 Box 2 Wider shot shows several confused police officers looking around desperately.

Cop 1: Maybe they used a helicopter?

Cop 2: Did you SEE a helicopter?

Cop 1: No.

Cop 1: Then shut up.

Row 3 Box 1 Klerely looks at the officers as they walk by, interested for a moment.

Row 3 Box 2 Klerely looks forlornly back at the music box.

Row 3 Box 3 Close up of her face, looking well worn and sad. She sighs.

Row 3 Box 4 Klerely moves on past the window.

Row 4 Box 1 Sluice lands in a small park, scattering flowers and a bit of concrete in all directions.

Row 4 Box 2 He gently sets the other three down though the looked slightly stunned.

Row 4 Box 3 Pete and Jesra slowly stand up, trying to orient themselves.

Pete: Was that really necessary?

Row 4 Box 4 Sluice looks chagrined and looks down.

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Row 1 Box 1 Forsalio looks at Amanda. He looks down at some papers.

Forsalio: I will want to have my cousin take a look at this…

Row 1 Box 2 Amanda looks at him.

Amanda: Your cousin?

Row 1 Box 3 Forasolio tries to look impressive and fails.

Forsalio: He’s a lawyer.

Row 2 Box 1 Amanda looks surprised a moment.

Row 2 Box 2 Amanda suddenly bursts out laughing. Slither laughs in the background.

Row 2 Box 3 Forsalio looks annoyed.

Forsalio: What’s so funny?

Row 3 Box 1 Amanda laughs a bit less.

Amanda: No, nothing. I understand your concern. I was just worried you had changed your mind and was glad you didn’t.

Row 3 Box 2 Forsalio still looks dubious.

Forsalio: Oh.

Row 3 Box 3 Amanda waves to Forsalio as he walks off.

Row 3 Box 4 Amanda and Slither both look at each other again.

Row 3 Box 5 They both start laughing again.