Thursday, November 6, 2014

[Script] Tossing Grenades at Windmills - Page 31

HAWKQUEEN
I can see through the eyes of the hawks. We need to head north.

INORIA
North it is then.

Inoria grabs Grenademan by the hand and pulls him north. She knocks out two remaining henchman and follows Hawkqueen's lead inside of the smoke. They move beyond the smoke.

The closer they come to a large warehouse, the faster they run. When they are almost there, another wave of henchmen comes out, branching clubs.

INORIA
Hey, they're learning. No guns this time.

HAWKQUEEN
If they were really learning, would they work for someone like Thorne in the first place?

INORIA
Good point.

GRENADEMAN
TALLYHO!

Grenademan single handedly charges them, tossing several grenades. Smoke, paint and oil cover the ground, covering many of the assailants. None of them immediately come out of the smoke. Grenademan vanishes inside it as well.

HAWKQUEEN
Where did he go?

INORIA
There he is!

Grenademan emerges from the smoke looking triumphant as another thug comes out after him, shooting a gun in his direction that he ignores initially. He starts to turn around while a hawk attacks the henchman, forcing him to drop the gun to the ground. The hawk moves into the smoke.

Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Grenademan Vs Zombies is now professionally edited

Grenademan Vs Zombies is done.  Its book 3 out of 5 but I'm still publisihing it as a series in the new year alternating with Forever West.  Fiona Skye has done a fantastic job editing it.

I will be reading from it every other week in the podcast starting two saturday's from now, with short stories alternating after that.  Rereading it, its amazing how my first serious arc story (before I wrote it) of five parts works well.  Book 1, 3, 4, and 5 are all awesome.  I'm not sure about 2....its too close to 4....and I might just do it last or as an anthology of short stories at some point...rather than actually do it...but I do think I need to create a short novella of  Book 1 at least.

Regardless, its progress and MY what a difference an editor makes....

Saturday, November 1, 2014

Precyber Chapter 53


Norne confronts Clarke and Emily.


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Thursday, October 30, 2014

[Script] Tossing Grenades at Windmills - Page 30

EXT – KENSINGTON RESEARCH FACILITY - DAY

Hawkqueen, Inoria and Grenademan all look out at a large chain link fence. Inoria puts a small portable staircase on the ground that raises up and allows the three heroes to rush up and then rush down it. The portable staircase dissolves into vapor.

HAWKQUEEN
Handy that.

INORIA
That's what it is designed to do.

GRENADEMAN
DO YOU HAVE AN
(interrupted)

INORIA
(interupting)
Shut up! Do you have to be so loud?!

GRENADEMAN
(using an only barely perceptible lower tone of voice)
WHY SHOULD I NOT BE LOUD?

INORIA
Are you stupid? So we don't alert the bad guys that we're coming.

GRENADEMAN
BUT THE FORCES OF GOOD ARE INDESTRUCTABLE.

INORIA
No they aren't.

GRENADEMAN
YES, THEY ARE.

INORIA
What about people that aren't super heroes but are good, are they indestructible?

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

[Script] Tossing Grenades at Windmills - Page 29

HAWKQUEEN
He was the most powerful metahuman on earth in his day. He was a hero. He fought crime through the twenties and thirties. He was last seen during WWII. Everyone thought he was dead.

INORIA
Maybe its some other guy.

HAWKQUEEN
True. Its not like its the first time we've run into someone taking up someone else's costume, but I think that this is different...

INORIA
The voice?

HAWKQUEEN
Yes. Its just so....him. You'd have to hear the old recordings.

INORIA
Well if it IS him, that would be kind of bad, wouldn't it?

HAWKQUEEN
What are you implying?

INORIA
We've taken on some pretty tough bad guys before, but nothing on the 'world's most powerful caliber'. Maybe we should call in some backup.

HAWKQUEEN
Maybe. Alert the police for now with a heads up. We're going to do some homework.

Saturday, October 25, 2014

Precyber Chapter 52


Emily and Clarke break into Aqua Noir.  They get help.


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Thursday, October 23, 2014

[Script] Tossing Grenades at Windmills - Page 28

HAWKQUEEN
Alright then. Let's see what strangeness lurks in the mind of the man with the thumbtack head.

The video next to the device shows the earlier scene of the interrogation followed by scenes of the asylum. Very abbreviated.

HAWKQUEEN
That was horrible.

INORIA
Poor guy.

HAWKQUEEN
At least they didn't actually die.

INORIA
Enough to make him lose his marbles.

HAWKQUEEN
We need to find out what Thorne was actually up to. Anything in there that would give us any indications?

INORIA
None that I can tell.

HAWKQUEEN
Shadows....Doctor Shadows, can you believe it?

INORIA
Who is he?

HAWKQUEEN
Old Dead Guy. He wouldn't interest you.

INORIA
Obviously not so dead. Spill.