Row 1 Box 1 The crack in the sky widens
a bit more.
Box 2 Angle shot from behind Sluice,
Vesuvius and Jesra as they look up at it, with a blinding light.
Tiny dots can be seen to come down.
Box 3 The dots become larger and are
trolls on parachutes as well as some mechanical suits (still small
and from a distance.
Vesuvius: Crap! Hide! We need to hide!
Box 4 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Won’t the Pixie Powder
Vesuvius: No!
Jesra: What about Pe-
Vesuvius: Forget him!
Row 2 Box 1
Sluice looks down calmly at Vesuvius.
Jesra is clearly NOT happy and looks like she’s about to say
something unkind to Vesuvius.
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius calms down a bit.
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks slightly
guilty.
Vesuvius: Well….OK. Don’t forget
Pete.
Row 2 Box 4 Jesra glares at Vesuvius
but isn’t QUITE as mad.
Jesra: Especially since he’s RIGHT
here. And can hear us, even if we can hear him.
Row 3 Box 1 There is a loud BOOM in the
distance.
Jesra: Half the city must have heard
that. The cops should slow them down at least.
Box 2 Vesuvius shakes his head.
Vesuvius: They’re not going to be
seen, just like us. But they’ll see US.
Box 3 Jesra looks around into the thin
air.
Jesra: Pete, pick something up.
Box 4 Vesuvius hops up on to Jesra’s
shoulder.
Vesuvius: It doesn’t work like that.
If he picks it up, we won’t notice. We need to finish our mission
and quickly!
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra puts her hands on her
hips, “You said it washes off with water.”
Box 2: Vesuvius: “Normally yes, but
with Pete who knows? The rules all change.”
Box 3: Jesra: “But you said you don’t
know where to go.”
Box 4: Sluice shows a bright light in
his hand to Vesuvius.
Row 4
Box 1 Vesuvius hops into Sluice’s
hand.
Vesuvius: The breach…it….must have
made things easier to find somehow. I think. We have a direction.
Box 2 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: But if it is easier for us, is
it easier for them?
Vesuvius: Yes. It is. Which is why we
need to hurry.
Box 3 All three start running.
Jesra: Pete! Keep up!
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