Emily runs out of time.
Saturday, February 22, 2014
Thursday, February 20, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 54
Row 1 The cop yells and dodges out of
the way.
Row 2 Box 1 Vesuvius looks at Jesra.
Vesuvius: Why are the police after you?
Row 2 Box 2 Jesra looks embarrassed and
looks up with her hand behind her head.
Row 2 Box 3 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Well…I’m kind of a thief.
Row 2 Box 4 Vesuvius smiles but crosses
his arms.
Vesuvius: Kind of?
Row 3 Box 1 The cop yells into the
radio.
Row 3 Box 2 The operator looks
concerned.
Row 3 Box 3 The operator talks into the
radio.
Row 4 Panel broken up of several cops
in subdivided panel receiving the message, looking concerned.
Radio Message: Known Suspect. Jesra
Lopolis, On Strength Enhancing Drugs. Threw a Car at Responding
Officer.
One of the Officers in the Panel: Car?!
Tuesday, February 18, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 53
Row 1 Box 1 The group of heroes goes
around a corner.
Row 1 Box 2 A policeman looks at them
but only sees Pete and Jesra. Angle must be obvious enough to imply
that the policeman can’t see Vesuvius or Sluice even though they
are right in front of him.
Row 1 Box 3 Jesra spots the policeman
and looks nervous.
Row 1 Box 4 The policeman looks at
Jesra and begins to move towards them.
Row 2 Box 1 Jesra looks at Pete.
Jesra: Run!
Pete: Huh?!
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius rolls his eyes.
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks at Sluice,
“We don’t have time for this. Can you take care of them?”
Row 2 Box 4 Sluice nods and starts to
reach for a car.
Row 3 & Row 4 – Shown from
policeman’s angle where it appears that Jesra is lifting the car
because she hands in the air due to yelling at Pete. The car is
upside down at an angle, held by Vesuvius, but also is an homage to
the old Superman comic cover of issue 1. (If this is artistically
impossible or ugly, just so an invisible car over Pete and Jesra’s
head upside down heading toward the cop.)
Saturday, February 15, 2014
Thursday, February 13, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 52
Row 1 A portal opens and Jesra, Pete,
Sluice and Vesuvius walk through into a crowded area. No one seems
to notice. Vesuvius is riding Jesra’s shoulder.
Row 2 Box 1 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Are you sure that no one can see
us?
Vesuvius: Yup.
Jesra: And they can’t see Pete or I
either?
Vesuvius: Er…mabye.
Jesra: And it will wear off.
Vesuvius: Yup.
Jesra: So what do we do next?
Row 2 Box 2 Close up of Vesuvius
looking sheepish.
Vesuvius: I don’t know. I mean….we
need to find the third seal. But beyond what the little bright light
says, this time I’m clueless. Sometimes we can learn little things
that can help…but in this case…your guess is as good as mine.
Row 3 Box 1 Sluice growls and sits down
in frustration on a nearby curve.
Vesuvius hops up on his shoulder.
Row 3 Box 2 Vesuvius pats Sluice’s
neck.
Vesuvius: I understand big guy.
Amanda: Understand what?
Vesuvius: We’re not normally this in
the dark. We normally have a lot of time to investigate this kind of
thing, but now….
Amanda: You don’t know what to do.
Vesuvius: Yeah pretty much. For some
reason we’re having problems finding the third seal.
Wednesday, February 12, 2014
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Cursebreaker is about a girl who works with her father to break the fire mage lock on firearms by making a weapon that does not need fire based gunpowder. The mages don't care but she can defend herself and uses the new weapon to do so.
Castles in the Air is about Elery, who lives in the besieged human town of Spielglase, who is tested by the elves and thinks she is to learn magic. On the way, however, she is given a rude shock and works to return home.
Other items for sale include:
The epic poem I, Odysseus.
A collection of poems: Spiders in the Sugar Factory.
The demented children's book, Billy's First Bolt Gun.
The previously published stories Waiting For the Monsters to Die and Mr. Hamburger.
The highly magical setting book, the Fate of Inglemia.
And the Poetry collection, Chaff in the Gear Box.
Tuesday, February 11, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 59
Row 1 Box 1 Slither whispers in
Amanda’s ear again. Amanda looks curious.
Row 1 Box 2 Amanda looks up and then
out through the window at Forsalio.
Amanda: Yes. You’re right. We can
do some more things to distract him.
Row 1 Box 3 She looks over at a group
of three scantily clad women.
Row 1 Box 4 Amanda gets a broad wicked
grin.
Amanda: And I think I have just the
thing in mind.
Row 2 Box 1 The scene shifts to Klerely
who looks into a window at a music box forlornely.
Row 2 Box 2 Wider shot shows several
confused police officers looking around desperately.
Cop 1: Maybe they used a helicopter?
Cop 2: Did you SEE a helicopter?
Cop 1: No.
Cop 1: Then shut up.
Row 3 Box 1 Klerely looks at the
officers as they walk by, interested for a moment.
Row 3 Box 2 Klerely looks forlornly
back at the music box.
Row 3 Box 3 Close up of her face,
looking well worn and sad. She sighs.
Row 3 Box 4 Klerely moves on past the
window.
Row 4 Box 1 Sluice lands in a small
park, scattering flowers and a bit of concrete in all directions.
Row 4 Box 2 He gently sets the other
three down though the looked slightly stunned.
Row 4 Box 3 Pete and Jesra slowly stand
up, trying to orient themselves.
Pete: Was that really necessary?
Row 4 Box 4 Sluice looks chagrined and
looks down.
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