Tuesday, April 1, 2014
Chapters 5 and 6 will continue soon
But I haven't had time to lay out the preposts yet. Look here again Thursday for the finish.
Thursday, March 27, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 64
Row 1 Box 1 The world is wrong, shaded
gray and in mist. Pete tries to keep up behind the other three.
This appears like this for the whole page.
Row 2 Box 1 They all turn a corner.
Row 2 Box 2 They go over a bridge.
Row 2 Box 3 They go past a large shop.
Some people are a corner. Pete follows behind.
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra knocks something over
from a toy cart.
Row 3 Box 2 People come over to help
pick up the things. Jesra looks back guilty but does not stop.
Row 3 Box 3 Pete trips over one of the
toys.
Row 4 Box 1 The three run into a crowd.
Row 4 Box 2 Pete stands up and looks
into the crowd and doesn’t see them anywhere.
Row 4 Box 3 Close up of Pete hanging
his head sadly.
Tuesday, March 25, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 63
Row 1 Box 1 The crack in the sky widens
a bit more.
Box 2 Angle shot from behind Sluice,
Vesuvius and Jesra as they look up at it, with a blinding light.
Tiny dots can be seen to come down.
Box 3 The dots become larger and are
trolls on parachutes as well as some mechanical suits (still small
and from a distance.
Vesuvius: Crap! Hide! We need to hide!
Box 4 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Won’t the Pixie Powder
Vesuvius: No!
Jesra: What about Pe-
Vesuvius: Forget him!
Row 2 Box 1
Sluice looks down calmly at Vesuvius.
Jesra is clearly NOT happy and looks like she’s about to say
something unkind to Vesuvius.
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius calms down a bit.
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks slightly
guilty.
Vesuvius: Well….OK. Don’t forget
Pete.
Row 2 Box 4 Jesra glares at Vesuvius
but isn’t QUITE as mad.
Jesra: Especially since he’s RIGHT
here. And can hear us, even if we can hear him.
Row 3 Box 1 There is a loud BOOM in the
distance.
Jesra: Half the city must have heard
that. The cops should slow them down at least.
Box 2 Vesuvius shakes his head.
Vesuvius: They’re not going to be
seen, just like us. But they’ll see US.
Box 3 Jesra looks around into the thin
air.
Jesra: Pete, pick something up.
Box 4 Vesuvius hops up on to Jesra’s
shoulder.
Vesuvius: It doesn’t work like that.
If he picks it up, we won’t notice. We need to finish our mission
and quickly!
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra puts her hands on her
hips, “You said it washes off with water.”
Box 2: Vesuvius: “Normally yes, but
with Pete who knows? The rules all change.”
Box 3: Jesra: “But you said you don’t
know where to go.”
Box 4: Sluice shows a bright light in
his hand to Vesuvius.
Row 4
Box 1 Vesuvius hops into Sluice’s
hand.
Vesuvius: The breach…it….must have
made things easier to find somehow. I think. We have a direction.
Box 2 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: But if it is easier for us, is
it easier for them?
Vesuvius: Yes. It is. Which is why we
need to hurry.
Box 3 All three start running.
Jesra: Pete! Keep up!
Saturday, March 22, 2014
Thursday, March 20, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 62
Row 1
Box 1 A large troll that is of the same
race as Sluice but more muscled, larger and with several spikes
coming out of his shoulders and head is sitting at a desk relaxing in
a circular ‘desk’ in the middle of a nexus of several corridors.
He is leaning back in his seat almost but not quite napping.
Box 2 Close up of the end of one of
those corridors with a large VII on it.
Box 3 A crack appears.
Row 2
Box 1 The troll looks up and down the
corridor.
Box 2 The troll falls back in his seat
Box 3 The troll stands up and runs down
the corridor.
Box 4 He enters the door way of a large
room.
Row 3
Box 1 Horus sits on his throne and the
troll runs up to the throne.
Box 2 The troll kneels.
Troll: There is a breach sire! I don’t
know how but there is a breach. Enough for us to send through one at
a time.
Box 3 Close up of Horus’s eyes.
Horus: Well then.
Box 4 Close up of his lips, smiling
wickedly.
Horus: Send them through.
Tuesday, March 18, 2014
[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 61
Row 1
Box 1 Vesuvius looks at Pete.
Vesuvius: Because we want you to.
Box 2 Sluice reaches into a bag on the
ground (that had not previously appeared in any panels) and pulls up
a hand of powder.
Vesuvius: It’s pretty handy stuff.
It lets you be invisible to anyone you want, but it takes some
getting used to.
Box 3 Angle of Pete facing Vesuvius
with Vesuvius’s back to Sluice while Vesuvius is talking to Pete.
Vesuvius: Until you get used to it,
you’re just invisible to everyone.
Row 2
Box 1 Sluice douses Pete with the
powder.
Box 2 Vesuvius looks up confused.
Box 3 Vesuvius looks at the powder in
his hand.
Box 4 Vesuvius looks at Sluice with
horror.
Vesuvius: Sluice! No!
Row 3
Box 1 Pete vanishes. Vesuvius is
floating through the air.
Box 2 Sluice and Vesuvius look around.
They can see Jesra.
Vesuvius: Where is he? Can you see him?
Box 3 Sluice looks worried.
Jesra: Where is he? What happened?
Box 4 Vesuvius falls to the ground.
Vesuvius: I have no idea. That’s
why I thought it would be a horrible idea….
Row 4
Wide shot of the area, in the sky a
crack appears in the VII symbol. A tiny word balloon unseen from
below
Vesuvius: To expose him to the powder.
Saturday, March 15, 2014
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