Thursday, April 3, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 5 - Page 65

Row 1 Klery walks amidst a row of marching trolls, not seeing them.
Narration: It is the unseen that makes us powerful.
Row 2 Klery walks past several cops while the trolls surround her. The cops are pushed out of the way.
Narration: They do not understand the stakes or the magic of the seals. They have fought a war half brain dead, and now somehow through luck they have managed to give themselves a chance.
Row 3 Klery walks into a church, and the trolls hesitate at the edge, held back by an invisible barrier.
Narration: I cannot allow ignorance to triumph. It was their ignorance that nearly destroyed everything the first time. It is the symbols that matter.
Row 4
Box 1 The troll takes an axe and cuts into the barrier.
Narration: It is the symbols pertinent to the world itself.
Box 2 The troll steps inside and the others follow behind.
Narration: Not the brand of good and evil that they want to impose upon it.

Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Chapters 5 and 6 will continue soon

But I haven't had time to lay out the preposts yet.  Look here again Thursday for the finish.

Thursday, March 27, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 64

Row 1 Box 1 The world is wrong, shaded gray and in mist. Pete tries to keep up behind the other three. This appears like this for the whole page.
Row 2 Box 1 They all turn a corner.
Row 2 Box 2 They go over a bridge.
Row 2 Box 3 They go past a large shop. Some people are a corner. Pete follows behind.
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra knocks something over from a toy cart.
Row 3 Box 2 People come over to help pick up the things. Jesra looks back guilty but does not stop.
Row 3 Box 3 Pete trips over one of the toys.
Row 4 Box 1 The three run into a crowd.
Row 4 Box 2 Pete stands up and looks into the crowd and doesn’t see them anywhere.
Row 4 Box 3 Close up of Pete hanging his head sadly.

Tuesday, March 25, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 63

Row 1 Box 1 The crack in the sky widens a bit more.
Box 2 Angle shot from behind Sluice, Vesuvius and Jesra as they look up at it, with a blinding light. Tiny dots can be seen to come down.
Box 3 The dots become larger and are trolls on parachutes as well as some mechanical suits (still small and from a distance.
Vesuvius: Crap! Hide! We need to hide!
Box 4 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Won’t the Pixie Powder
Vesuvius: No!
Jesra: What about Pe-
Vesuvius: Forget him!
Row 2 Box 1
Sluice looks down calmly at Vesuvius. Jesra is clearly NOT happy and looks like she’s about to say something unkind to Vesuvius.
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius calms down a bit.
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks slightly guilty.
Vesuvius: Well….OK. Don’t forget Pete.
Row 2 Box 4 Jesra glares at Vesuvius but isn’t QUITE as mad.
Jesra: Especially since he’s RIGHT here. And can hear us, even if we can hear him.
Row 3 Box 1 There is a loud BOOM in the distance.
Jesra: Half the city must have heard that. The cops should slow them down at least.
Box 2 Vesuvius shakes his head.
Vesuvius: They’re not going to be seen, just like us. But they’ll see US.
Box 3 Jesra looks around into the thin air.
Jesra: Pete, pick something up.
Box 4 Vesuvius hops up on to Jesra’s shoulder.
Vesuvius: It doesn’t work like that. If he picks it up, we won’t notice. We need to finish our mission and quickly!
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra puts her hands on her hips, “You said it washes off with water.”
Box 2: Vesuvius: “Normally yes, but with Pete who knows? The rules all change.”
Box 3: Jesra: “But you said you don’t know where to go.”
Box 4: Sluice shows a bright light in his hand to Vesuvius.
Row 4
Box 1 Vesuvius hops into Sluice’s hand.
Vesuvius: The breach…it….must have made things easier to find somehow. I think. We have a direction.
Box 2 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: But if it is easier for us, is it easier for them?
Vesuvius: Yes. It is. Which is why we need to hurry.
Box 3 All three start running.
Jesra: Pete! Keep up!

Saturday, March 22, 2014

Precyber - Chapter 23


Clark decides to take Emily out on a date.


Check out this episode!

Thursday, March 20, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 62

Row 1
Box 1 A large troll that is of the same race as Sluice but more muscled, larger and with several spikes coming out of his shoulders and head is sitting at a desk relaxing in a circular ‘desk’ in the middle of a nexus of several corridors. He is leaning back in his seat almost but not quite napping.
Box 2 Close up of the end of one of those corridors with a large VII on it.
Box 3 A crack appears.
Row 2
Box 1 The troll looks up and down the corridor.
Box 2 The troll falls back in his seat
Box 3 The troll stands up and runs down the corridor.
Box 4 He enters the door way of a large room.
Row 3
Box 1 Horus sits on his throne and the troll runs up to the throne.
Box 2 The troll kneels.
Troll: There is a breach sire! I don’t know how but there is a breach. Enough for us to send through one at a time.
Box 3 Close up of Horus’s eyes.
Horus: Well then.
Box 4 Close up of his lips, smiling wickedly.
Horus: Send them through.

Tuesday, March 18, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 61

Row 1
Box 1 Vesuvius looks at Pete.
Vesuvius: Because we want you to.
Box 2 Sluice reaches into a bag on the ground (that had not previously appeared in any panels) and pulls up a hand of powder.
Vesuvius: It’s pretty handy stuff. It lets you be invisible to anyone you want, but it takes some getting used to.
Box 3 Angle of Pete facing Vesuvius with Vesuvius’s back to Sluice while Vesuvius is talking to Pete.
Vesuvius: Until you get used to it, you’re just invisible to everyone.
Row 2
Box 1 Sluice douses Pete with the powder.
Box 2 Vesuvius looks up confused.
Box 3 Vesuvius looks at the powder in his hand.
Box 4 Vesuvius looks at Sluice with horror.
Vesuvius: Sluice! No!
Row 3
Box 1 Pete vanishes. Vesuvius is floating through the air.
Box 2 Sluice and Vesuvius look around. They can see Jesra.
Vesuvius: Where is he? Can you see him?
Box 3 Sluice looks worried.
Jesra: Where is he? What happened?
Box 4 Vesuvius falls to the ground.
Vesuvius: I have no idea. That’s why I thought it would be a horrible idea….
Row 4
Wide shot of the area, in the sky a crack appears in the VII symbol. A tiny word balloon unseen from below
Vesuvius: To expose him to the powder.