Tuesday, April 15, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Page 67 - Chapter 5

Row 1
Box 1 Pete walks down a cobble stone street in one of the older areas of town. The light of the sun is slowly setting in the distance. All of the light clearly looks wrong and in this case the sun is a white circle in a black back ground with edges of black against the horizon.
Box 2 Pete spots some trolls in the distance, unseen by nearby cops. He smiles. There is a municipal park in the background with some shops on the far side out of focus.
Pete: Ah! Some of Sluice’s people. Maybe they can help me.
Box 3 Pete walks up totally unseen to the trolls who have begun talking to each other.
Row 2
Box 1 Pete waves to one of the trolls. The trolls do not see him. Meanwhile, a pigeon lands unseen on one of the shoulders of the trolls.
Pete: Hello? I say hello there?!
Box 2 Same scene from the cops perspective. There is a pigeon sitting in the middle of the air, just hovering there.
Cop #1: Any sign of them?
Cop #2: None.
Cop #1: Damn it.
Cop #2: Er…George?
Box #3 Close up of George’s face. Looking annoyed.
George: What?
Box #4: Cop points to the bird hovering in mid air.
Row 3 Box 1
Both cops star at the pigeon hovering there.
Row 3 Box 2 We see things again from Pete’s perspective. Troll #1 spots the pigeon and points it out to Troll #2.
Pete: Hello? Can you hear me?
Row 3 Box 3 Close up of Troll #2’s face as it gets a wicked grin.
Row 4
Box #1: Troll #2 reaches over and pops the pigeon into a bloody pulp like it might have been a zit.
The cops look utterly shocked. Pete is reaching back to kick one of the two trolls to get its attention.
Box #2: The two trolls laugh. Pete is standing rather still. In the background George is sick off panel but obviously doing so with a “RETCH” or some such thing indicating such.
Pete: Er….never mind then. Maybe it’s a good thing you can’t see me.

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