Thursday, March 27, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 64

Row 1 Box 1 The world is wrong, shaded gray and in mist. Pete tries to keep up behind the other three. This appears like this for the whole page.
Row 2 Box 1 They all turn a corner.
Row 2 Box 2 They go over a bridge.
Row 2 Box 3 They go past a large shop. Some people are a corner. Pete follows behind.
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra knocks something over from a toy cart.
Row 3 Box 2 People come over to help pick up the things. Jesra looks back guilty but does not stop.
Row 3 Box 3 Pete trips over one of the toys.
Row 4 Box 1 The three run into a crowd.
Row 4 Box 2 Pete stands up and looks into the crowd and doesn’t see them anywhere.
Row 4 Box 3 Close up of Pete hanging his head sadly.

Tuesday, March 25, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 63

Row 1 Box 1 The crack in the sky widens a bit more.
Box 2 Angle shot from behind Sluice, Vesuvius and Jesra as they look up at it, with a blinding light. Tiny dots can be seen to come down.
Box 3 The dots become larger and are trolls on parachutes as well as some mechanical suits (still small and from a distance.
Vesuvius: Crap! Hide! We need to hide!
Box 4 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: Won’t the Pixie Powder
Vesuvius: No!
Jesra: What about Pe-
Vesuvius: Forget him!
Row 2 Box 1
Sluice looks down calmly at Vesuvius. Jesra is clearly NOT happy and looks like she’s about to say something unkind to Vesuvius.
Row 2 Box 2 Vesuvius calms down a bit.
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius looks slightly guilty.
Vesuvius: Well….OK. Don’t forget Pete.
Row 2 Box 4 Jesra glares at Vesuvius but isn’t QUITE as mad.
Jesra: Especially since he’s RIGHT here. And can hear us, even if we can hear him.
Row 3 Box 1 There is a loud BOOM in the distance.
Jesra: Half the city must have heard that. The cops should slow them down at least.
Box 2 Vesuvius shakes his head.
Vesuvius: They’re not going to be seen, just like us. But they’ll see US.
Box 3 Jesra looks around into the thin air.
Jesra: Pete, pick something up.
Box 4 Vesuvius hops up on to Jesra’s shoulder.
Vesuvius: It doesn’t work like that. If he picks it up, we won’t notice. We need to finish our mission and quickly!
Row 3 Box 1 Jesra puts her hands on her hips, “You said it washes off with water.”
Box 2: Vesuvius: “Normally yes, but with Pete who knows? The rules all change.”
Box 3: Jesra: “But you said you don’t know where to go.”
Box 4: Sluice shows a bright light in his hand to Vesuvius.
Row 4
Box 1 Vesuvius hops into Sluice’s hand.
Vesuvius: The breach…it….must have made things easier to find somehow. I think. We have a direction.
Box 2 Jesra looks at Vesuvius.
Jesra: But if it is easier for us, is it easier for them?
Vesuvius: Yes. It is. Which is why we need to hurry.
Box 3 All three start running.
Jesra: Pete! Keep up!

Saturday, March 22, 2014

Precyber - Chapter 23


Clark decides to take Emily out on a date.


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Thursday, March 20, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 62

Row 1
Box 1 A large troll that is of the same race as Sluice but more muscled, larger and with several spikes coming out of his shoulders and head is sitting at a desk relaxing in a circular ‘desk’ in the middle of a nexus of several corridors. He is leaning back in his seat almost but not quite napping.
Box 2 Close up of the end of one of those corridors with a large VII on it.
Box 3 A crack appears.
Row 2
Box 1 The troll looks up and down the corridor.
Box 2 The troll falls back in his seat
Box 3 The troll stands up and runs down the corridor.
Box 4 He enters the door way of a large room.
Row 3
Box 1 Horus sits on his throne and the troll runs up to the throne.
Box 2 The troll kneels.
Troll: There is a breach sire! I don’t know how but there is a breach. Enough for us to send through one at a time.
Box 3 Close up of Horus’s eyes.
Horus: Well then.
Box 4 Close up of his lips, smiling wickedly.
Horus: Send them through.

Tuesday, March 18, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 61

Row 1
Box 1 Vesuvius looks at Pete.
Vesuvius: Because we want you to.
Box 2 Sluice reaches into a bag on the ground (that had not previously appeared in any panels) and pulls up a hand of powder.
Vesuvius: It’s pretty handy stuff. It lets you be invisible to anyone you want, but it takes some getting used to.
Box 3 Angle of Pete facing Vesuvius with Vesuvius’s back to Sluice while Vesuvius is talking to Pete.
Vesuvius: Until you get used to it, you’re just invisible to everyone.
Row 2
Box 1 Sluice douses Pete with the powder.
Box 2 Vesuvius looks up confused.
Box 3 Vesuvius looks at the powder in his hand.
Box 4 Vesuvius looks at Sluice with horror.
Vesuvius: Sluice! No!
Row 3
Box 1 Pete vanishes. Vesuvius is floating through the air.
Box 2 Sluice and Vesuvius look around. They can see Jesra.
Vesuvius: Where is he? Can you see him?
Box 3 Sluice looks worried.
Jesra: Where is he? What happened?
Box 4 Vesuvius falls to the ground.
Vesuvius: I have no idea. That’s why I thought it would be a horrible idea….
Row 4
Wide shot of the area, in the sky a crack appears in the VII symbol. A tiny word balloon unseen from below
Vesuvius: To expose him to the powder.

Saturday, March 15, 2014

Precyber - Chapter 22


Emily is warned to stay away from Clark.


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Thursday, March 13, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 60

Row 1 Box 1 Jesra looks at Pete.
Jesra: I think it was. I think it was very good thinking that got us out of there in time.
Row 1 Box 2 Sluice smiles at Jesra.
Row 1 Box 3 Pete frowns at the smile. He doesn’t SAY anything but the ‘why are you taking his side over mine’ should be implied.
Row 2 Box 1 Vesuvius hops onto Pete’s shoulder.
Vesuvius: We need to get you hidden from the cops Jesra.
Row 2 Box 2 Jesra throws her her shoulders back and hands out questioningly.
Jesra: I’m open to ideas. You guys have some kind of magic?
Row 2 Box 3 Vesuvius nods.
Vesuvius: Same stuff that makes us invisible. Sluice, get the Pixie Powder.
Row 2 Box 4 Sluice reaches into a pouch that was not previously seen and pulls out a small vial.
Row 3 Box 1 He moves to sprinkle Jesra.
Row 3 Box 2 Jesra holds up a hand.
Jesra: Wait. Are there any side effects I should know about?
Row 3 Box 3 Vesuvius laughs.
Vesuvius: Just don’t get wet unless you have a spell to protect you from the rain.
Row 3 Box 4 Jesra nods.
Row 4 Box 1 Jesra holds her arms up and closes her eyes.
Row 4 Box 2 Sluice sprinkles her with the powder.
Row 4 Box 3 Jesra glows
Row 4 Box 4 Jesra vanishes from Pete’s view.
Pete: Where…wow it worked. I can’t see her. But how come I can still see you two? (Looks at Vesuvius and Sluice)

Saturday, March 8, 2014

Precyber - Chapter 21


Clarke gets yet another threat and a warning from his boss.  He is in a downward spiral.


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Thursday, March 6, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 58

Row 1 Box 1 A older woman (KLERELY) in her early sixties walks up to the museum where Forsalio had his hot dog stand.
Row 1 Box 2 Klerly holds her stomache like she is hungry and licks her lips.
Row 1 Box 3 Klerely moves towards where the stand was, but now isn’t. Trash and a few bits of paper show that the stand isn’t there anymore.
Row 2 Box 1 Klerely sighs and then looks over at the museum where Forsalio once saw Pete and Jesra kissing, but where there is now nothing.
Row 2 Box 2 Klerely looks sad about something and then moves on.
Row 3 Box 1 Amanda and Slither are watching Forsalio from a distance outside of his house. Amanda listens to Slither say something in her ear whilst on her shoulder.
Row 3 Box 2 Amanda looks at Slither.
Amanda: Yes, its possible for him to see me out here, but I can’t talk to him if I’m invisible can I? There are problems with that, and going back and forth across the veil can do…bad things to you.
Row 3 Box 3 Slither whispers in her ear again.
Row 4 Box 1 Amanda looks at Forsalio with Slither on her shoulder.
Amanda: Yes. Humans consider that bad. Now we just need to keep him out of circulation long enough..and its over.
Row 4 Box 2 Close up of Slither with a somewhat demonic look on his face.
Row 4 Box 3 Amanda shudders and keeps looking at Forsalio.
Amanda: No. We can’t just dump him into the lake. He has to stay here for the magic to work.

Tuesday, March 4, 2014

[Seventh Seal] Chapter 4 - Page 57

Giant page large picture of Sluice holding Vesuvius, Pete and Jesra and leaping up through the air. Pete and Jesra look to be having a blast, the cops (tiny below) look astonished, and Vesuvius looks like, “Why, yes, this does happen to me every day whilst smiling.”
Tiny corner of the upper left: Shows Sluice grabbing everyone quickly.
Tiny corner in upper right: Close up of a cop looking up in disbelief.
Tiny corner in lower left: Close up of a cop looking in disbelief.
Tiny corner in lower right: Close up of a dog looking up looking clueless.

Monday, March 3, 2014

[Naked City Atlanta] Progression - Connection of Cowcatcher to Why

by Emmit Other

Train gets cow catcher
Cow Catcher hits cow
Cow splatters to hamburger
Hamburger turned into Hamburger
Hamburger becomes Profit
Hamburger also becomes Sewage

Profit becomes Rent
Rent becomes part of Mr. Blingermeyer's Bow Tie

Sewage becomes part of river
River becomes part of fish

Bowtie becomes part of suit
Suit is part of courtship
Courtship leads to marriage

Fish becomes part of larger fish
Larger fish becomes part of East Asian Carp

Float around the world Mr. Carp
He sees the world and ages well.

Marriage leads to baby
Baby becomes another Blingermeyer

Carp circles the globe and returns to the lock
Carp hits Carp Catcher
Carp served for 5.99 at All You Can Eat Fish Buffet

Blingermeyer eats Fish
Blingermeyer J.R. Marries Again
Blingermeyer becomes Farmer
Farmer Dies
Bride becomes Widow

Annoyed at Fly
Swallows Fly Spider Frog Cat Dog Cow Death
Widow Becomes Tree
Tree Grows
Along Comes Blingermeyer III
Tree loves Three
Play Apples Cash House Boat Stump 
Happy Dead Tree
Happy Dead Three
Happy Worms
Happy Fungi
Happy Orchard
Happy Agricultural Industrial Conglomerate
Happy Harvest of Underpaid Cheap Illegal Immigration
Happy Process of Vitamin and Chemical Enrichment
Happy Part of This Nutritiously Balanced Sugary Cereal Breakfast

That's where it came from.
Now shut up and let me read my God Damn paper.

Saturday, March 1, 2014

Precyber - Chapter 20


Clarke finally solves one problem....though perhaps not to his ultimate satisfaction.


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